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Blue window of the Trinity Chapel, Salisbury cathedral

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The Prisoner of Conscience window made from Chartres blue glass, by Gabriel Loire in 1980.

Camera:Pentax Optio X90 Check out PENTAXPORTAL!
Recording media:JPEG (digital)
Date Taken:1 Jan 2012 - 12:00 AM
Focal Length:9.3mm
Shutter Speed:2sec
Exposure Comp:0.0
ISO:200
Flash:Off, Did not fire
Title:Blue window of the Trinity Chapel, Salisbury cathedral
Username:LouiseTopp LouiseTopp
Uploaded:16 Dec 2012 - 4:59 PM
Tags:Architecture, England, Salisbury, Salisbury cathedral wiltshire, Uk, Wiltshire
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HELANA
HELANA e2 Member 4HELANA vcard United Kingdom
16 Dec 2012 - 11:26 PM

Beautifuly capture image,nice colours.
Elena

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banehawi
banehawi Critique Team 10867 forum postsbanehawi vcard Canada2864 Constructive Critique Points
16 Dec 2012 - 11:59 PM

Its a nice shot from a compact Aura.

Theres some geometric irregularities, some sue to the fact you had the camera tilted up a little to include the columns, and some to be expected at a wide angle.

There are some very bright areas, the top centre of the stained glass being one, but I think the camera did quite a decent job of balancing the extremes of low light and very bright.


I have uploaded a mod, - all Ive done is address some of the geometry, and to do that required some cropping also.


regards


Willie

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paulbroad
paulbroad  781 forum posts United Kingdom851 Constructive Critique Points
17 Dec 2012 - 10:19 AM

Good effort. The tonal range is great in such images and you have done well to handle it, but the result is a slightly flat image over all. Could use the dodge tool to brighten some areas. There is a slight HDR feel?

Paul

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LouiseTopp
10 Aug 2013 - 7:04 PM

Hi Paul.

I use Google Picasa 3 so I don't have Photoshop. Is Lightroom worth considering please? Smile

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