Boats on River Avon

NatalieKinnear

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24 Mar 2008 - 10:50 PM

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I rather like the composition here and I think the image works really well in bw.

I think that it's a little too dark in places though, so have put up a modification where I have adjusted the tonal range slightly. If you look at the reflection of the boat in the water, you can now see the various greys, rather than black. I also cloned out a couple of little distractions.

Carabosse (e2 Member)

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25 Mar 2008 - 12:03 AM

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I too have uploaded a mod. I've sepia toned it to make the wood look a bit more like..... wood!

picnic66

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26 Jan 2009 - 2:27 AM

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agree with Dogend above! but Natalie is right in seeking to bring out the various greys in the reflection. great composition.