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bokeh lights,
warm,
low light,
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logo,
brand
| Brand: | NIKON CORPORATION |
| Camera: | Nikon D5100  Check out Nikon Nation! |
| Lens: | 35mm f/1.8 G |
| Recording media: | JPEG (digital) |
| Date Taken: | 6 Oct 2012 - 2:14 PM |
| Focal Length: | 35mm |
| Lens Max Aperture: | f/1.7 |
| Aperture: | f/1.8 |
| Shutter Speed: | 1/100sec |
| Exposure Comp: | 0.0 |
| ISO: | 100 |
| Exposure Mode: | Manual |
| Metering Mode: | Center-weighted average |
| Flash: | No Flash |
| Title: | Bokeh Warmth |
| Username: | 
AEA |
| Uploaded: | 23 Feb 2013 - 10:22 AM |
| Tags: | Brand, Commercial, Detail, General, Lenscap, Logo, Low light, Nikon, Warm |
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This isn't doing much for me tbh,if you were going for a silhouette then the lens cap needs to be a touch darker,if your intention was to show the cap then it could do with lightening slightly at least to see the letters.
I find the large yellow oval at the top very distracting,so too the dark triangle close to the top.Fairly easy to remove in your editing program.
the composition is ok,I do like negative space...some don't.
I like the warm colours of the bg.
It may help when uploading to the Critique Gallery if you give us an idea of what you were trying to achieve,where you think you have gone right or wrong, then we would have a bit more to go on & try to help you more.
I've looked at this a couple of times and I just cannot see what it is trying to achieve. It seems very strange to create a near-silhouette that practically obliterates the detail in the actual subject.
There's scope here for a Father Ted style 'Near - big. Small - far away...' exercise, but the emphasis needs to be on the Near - big element.
Plus - that nail varnish effect visible on the thumb nail is horrible and a real distraction!
Moira
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