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Taken while visiting Bognor Regis

Camera:Nikon D90 Check out Nikon Nation!
Lens:18-105mm VR Kit Lens
Recording media:RAW (digital)
Title:Bosham Bay
Username:kbtimages kbtimages
Uploaded:16 Aug 2010 - 8:58 PM
Tags:Bay, Boat, Landscape / travel, Night / low light, Sunset, Transport, Water, West sussex
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Jestertheclown
16 Aug 2010 - 11:15 PMConstructive Critique!This comment was flagged as constructive critique! 

I adjusted the white balance in Lightroom which took some of the saturation out of the sunset.
Then on to CS5.
I lassoed the whole of the black bit at the bottom and adjusted shadows/highlights, levels, brightness and contrast in varying degrees.
Then I cropped to remove some of the foreground and (hopefully!) improve the balance of the shot.
Finally I straightened it using a ruler across the horizon.

Hope it's OK.

Bren.

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paulbroad
paulbroad  789 forum posts United Kingdom880 Constructive Critique Points
17 Aug 2010 - 8:03 AM

The mod is a great improvement - you must watch the horizon - should never lean. The problem was the foreground - very heavy and lacking any detail.

Paul

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