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Recording media:JPEG (digital)
Title:BROKEN CIRCLES
Username:youmightlikethis youmightlikethis
Uploaded:30 May 2011 - 6:30 PM
Tags:General, Specialist / abstract
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joelrouse
joelrouse  627 forum posts United Kingdom
30 May 2011 - 6:51 PM

Very cool. Like this!
Joel

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Merlin_k
Merlin_k e2 Member 6Merlin_k vcard Netherlands2 Constructive Critique Points
30 May 2011 - 7:00 PMConstructive Critique!This comment was flagged as constructive critique! 

Firstly, I prefer the colour version at the moment but I believe that the mono should be better. What holds me back on the mono is that there is some clear marking around the top and bottom of the frame whcih shows that the brush hasn't been applied to the whole of the tryptic. The light grey at the top and bottom is distracting. In addition I find the entire contrast in the mono is overdone.
Secondly, I love the concept and putting it into a tryptic. However, the distance closer between the first and second is not the same as the second and third. I think that what you have done is halve the distance and then halve it again (counting the pillars on the far side you have 6 before the first arch in picture one, 3 in pcture 2 and 1.5 in picture 3). I think it would have been better to have either moved or zoomed the same distance both times. I'm guessing it's zoom as I think you must be standing out on a beam.

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Canonshots
31 May 2011 - 11:26 AM

Regarding the first two versions, mono beats colour as far as I am concerned. The colour version is almost mono anyway. Version 3 is something else. It really blew me away. The use of words to make a visual point rarely works, but you have brought it off splendidly here.

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