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a very near shot on a butterfly with out zooming
i enjoyed this shot.

Camera:Nikon Coolpix S550 Check out Nikon Nation!
Lens:nikor lense
Recording media:JPEG (digital)
Title:butterfly
Username:padma_cpwd padma_cpwd
Uploaded:18 Sep 2010 - 2:21 PM
Tags:Close-up / macro, Close-up/macro, Wildlife / nature, Wildlife/nature
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sedonamoonshine
sedonamoonshine e2 Member 4sedonamoonshine vcard England
18 Sep 2010 - 2:50 PM

stunning.................

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pamelajean
pamelajean Critique Team 8831 forum postspamelajean vcard United Kingdom1638 Constructive Critique Points
18 Sep 2010 - 5:04 PM

Very nice, Padma, good detail on every part of the butterfly and twig. The background may be a bit fussy, but it is nicely blurred. My only niggle is your composition. I would like to see the butterfly lower in the frame and with less space behind it. It's a good idea to leave space in the area into which the butterfly is facing/looking, and here I would say it is to the top and the right.
Pamela.

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Jestertheclown
18 Sep 2010 - 9:09 PM

This is really very good.

As Pamela has said, the composition could be improved, preferably at the time of shooting but there's room for improvement in the shot as it is.
I've uploaded a mod. in which I've cropped it and sharpened it slightly.
Ideally, you'd need a bit more room on the right but then, things are rarely ideal!
Just my opinion, hope you don't mind.

Cheers,

Bren.

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