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Not sure about this at all, so general opinion, please. Fails on rules of composition but hought it had some impact. Cropped to remove a lot of nothing, top and bottom. Through doors of Spa Cafe, Bridlington.

EOS 40D with 10/20 Sigma. About 20mm actual. f8, aperture priority. -2/3 stop comp. ISO400.

Paul

Camera:Canon EOS 40D
Lens:10/20 Sigma
Recording media:JPEG (digital)
Title:Cafe.
Username:paulbroad paulbroad
Uploaded:7 Jan 2013 - 8:15 AM
Tags:Cafe, Panoramic., Portraits / people, Silhouette
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paulbroad
paulbroad  681 forum posts United Kingdom840 Constructive Critique Points
7 Jan 2013 - 8:16 AM

Sorry, not Spa for those who know Brid. Jerome's.

Paul

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nsutcliffe
7 Jan 2013 - 8:45 AM

There is an awful lot going on and competing for attention...but I like it.

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banehawi
banehawi Critique Team 10777 forum postsbanehawi vcard Canada2779 Constructive Critique Points
7 Jan 2013 - 4:15 PM

It depends on what you might think is going on. It looks like a lonely couple in an large empty space, so it may speak to some people. I have made it b&w, straightened and sharpened for a more stark looking image. Im not sure either.


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Sooty_1
Sooty_1 Critique Team 41173 forum posts United Kingdom196 Constructive Critique Points
7 Jan 2013 - 11:26 PM

I think there's too much clutter...all the lines compete for attention, but they aren't clearly defined enough and at odd angles. To me it looks like a big empty space too, and isolating the people against the windows, cutting out extraneous stuff would work better, I think.

Nick

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