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Another from Friday session,softbox/gold reflector,snoot to highlight hair,thought about cropping to the left area of image but decided against - thanks for looking!

Camera:Canon EOS 300D
Lens:Tamron90 Macro Check out Totally Tamron!
Recording media:CF100iso
Title:Caitlin
Username:jimPat jimPat
Uploaded:26 Mar 2006 - 10:48 AM
Tags:Portraits / people
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keith selmes
26 Mar 2006 - 11:06 AM

Has a kind of wistful look.
Good colour composition.
A little blown out above the nose ?
Unusual to have a head in centre of a rectangle, works for me.

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dark_lord
dark_lord Critique Team 101475 forum postsdark_lord vcard England130 Constructive Critique Points
26 Mar 2006 - 11:09 AM

I like the lighting and the use of the dark background, though a square or portrait format would be better suited.

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John_Horner
John_Horner e2 Member 9John_Horner vcard England2 Constructive Critique Points
26 Mar 2006 - 11:44 AM

A lovely portrait.

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mshillam
mshillam  8 United Kingdom
26 Mar 2006 - 11:55 AM

Lovely shot - lovely model - lovely eyes.

Matt :0)

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StevieH
StevieH  8
26 Mar 2006 - 12:01 PM

Great control of lighting, I know what you mean about the crop, my suggestion would be to leave the same size frame but move her across, and add some black on the far right, and lose some on the left.

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david j. green
26 Mar 2006 - 1:28 PM

A great portrait, I like the posing and expression of the model. I think cropping off say 15-20% from the left would help the composition to give the model space to look into.

David

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doug_7
doug_7  8482 forum posts England
26 Mar 2006 - 8:33 PM

great lighting.
d.

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BillS
BillS  827 forum posts United Kingdom
27 Mar 2006 - 1:52 AM

Beautifl lighting , I would have cropped a bit off the left.

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Leox
Leox  8
27 Mar 2006 - 2:24 AM

I must renew my love Grin

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julesm
julesm  101698 forum posts United Kingdom7 Constructive Critique Points
27 Mar 2006 - 2:45 AM

I like the image, but would consider losing a fair portion off the left side

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matsumner
matsumner  883 forum posts
27 Mar 2006 - 8:31 AM

very nice, i have done some mods hope you dont mind

matt

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jpenguin
jpenguin  966 forum posts United Kingdom
2 Apr 2006 - 12:47 AM

good shot - would love to just shift her over to the left of the frame though.

J

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kaybee
kaybee  103827 forum posts Scotland24 Constructive Critique Points
25 Jun 2006 - 6:01 PM

Very nice


Roy

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Slaterm
Slaterm  8496 forum posts United Kingdom1 Constructive Critique Points
23 Jul 2006 - 5:21 PM

lovely portrait - well taken - happy to be number 30

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spanner99
spanner99  8
7 Nov 2007 - 8:56 AM

this picture is really nice, I like it Smile

Steph
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