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Shot at Bergen Kunstmuseum.

Piece on the left: Multiple - Sculpture in Wood by Julio Le Parc (1968).

Piece on the right: Reflecting Room - Wood, mirror, coloured glass by Hugo De Marco (1963).

Special thanks to Mark for his GEA on Cardemine Pratensis.

Thanks for looking,

Anne

Camera:Canon Powershot G12
Lens:fixed
Recording media:RAW (digital)
Focal Length:9.78mm
Lens Max Aperture:f/2.8
Aperture:f/3.2
Shutter Speed:1/30sec
Exposure Comp:-2/3
ISO:250
Title:Captive Audience
Username:AnneWorner AnneWorner
Uploaded:5 Jul 2012 - 12:54 AM
Tags:Abstract, Black & white, General, Photo journalism, Street
Votes:51
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paskinmj
5 Jul 2012 - 1:02 AM
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Great composition. Like how the shapes lead you into the subject. Excellent spot and moment captured too,
Matt

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CarolG
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5 Jul 2012 - 5:28 AM
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Well composed, captured and presented, Anne. I like the way the framework of the item on the right appears to be 'pointing' at the onlooker. Carol

posty57
5 Jul 2012 - 5:45 AM
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All the elements just 'click'...Love it !

Barry

fentiger
5 Jul 2012 - 7:03 AM
1

This is a really good study! Well seen and composed with a full range of tones. Well done Anne!

Albert

andylea
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5 Jul 2012 - 7:38 AM
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brilliant comp anne wonderful detail and tones love the comp and title a cracker nice one Wink
andy

barbarahirst
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5 Jul 2012 - 8:21 AM
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the comp works so well
title spot on

mrswoolybill
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5 Jul 2012 - 8:35 AM
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An abstract composition of lines and angles, with human interest as a bonus.
Moira

Badgerfred
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5 Jul 2012 - 9:09 AM
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A super composition Anne,
Fred.

WhiteRose1
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5 Jul 2012 - 9:23 AM
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It asks the question 'what is he thinking'. Very good inter-relationship between man and art (although this type of art is questionable to me! but that's a whole new debate). Well spotted and captured Anne.

Dave

SlowSong
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5 Jul 2012 - 10:45 AM
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Gosh yes, the V of the hood meeting the V of the artwork is so in sync. Beautifully constructed of angles and tones. Excellent.
I wonder if cloning out the wires and plug on the wall would make any difference.
Chris

AnneWorner
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5 Jul 2012 - 1:34 PM
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Quote: Gosh yes, the V of the hood meeting the V of the artwork is so in sync. Beautifully constructed of angles and tones. Excellent.
I wonder if cloning out the wires and plug on the wall would make any difference.
Chris

Thanks for the comment Chris. The electric is what runs the undulating piece of artwork, and since it's photojournalism, personally think the wiring should stay in place Smile

Anne

mikbee
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5 Jul 2012 - 2:04 PM
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A well composed shot Anne.
And agree with your comment.
Shots like this should be ''as seen'' I reckon !!
Mick.

TrevBatWCC
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5 Jul 2012 - 4:09 PM
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A great mono study, Anne, and very well composed Smile I'd have left the plug and wiring in too! Wink
Trev Smile

ChiliMan
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5 Jul 2012 - 4:40 PM
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Wonderful candid capture, Anne. I love the intent gaze. The light and shadows in this place lend themselves so well to BW and you've caught 'em just so Smile

Andrew

Last Modified By ChiliMan at 5 Jul 2012 - 4:41 PM
gajewski
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5 Jul 2012 - 5:14 PM
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Anne, this is some really fine B&W photography. The comp. is superb -- catching just the right profile on his face to convey his concentration. Thanks for putting in the commentary -- including the art work titles.
I hope you are feeling better.
-=\Walter

lifesnapper
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5 Jul 2012 - 5:30 PM
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A very nicely composed image Anne, with just the right amount of space between the Man and the subject of His attention.

John Smile

Daffy1
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5 Jul 2012 - 5:53 PM
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Love it.

jaktis
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5 Jul 2012 - 6:46 PM
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I wonder what his thoughts are

Peter

banehawi
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5 Jul 2012 - 6:56 PM
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Well seen and it works well enough for an award too!



regards


Willie

AnneWorner
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5 Jul 2012 - 6:58 PM
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Quote: Well seen and it works well enough for an award too!



regards


Willie

Thanks Willie - very much appreciated coming from you, but, errrr, no modifications?? Wink

Anne

banehawi
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5 Jul 2012 - 7:01 PM
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Nothing I can add to make it any better!


W

scrimmy
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5 Jul 2012 - 7:19 PM
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oh you do this so well........great image........and what is it that attracts me?.....
the light..shadow...lines....all of which seem to compliment and enhance each other.....definitely a "wefi" image

banehawi
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5 Jul 2012 - 7:25 PM
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Notice how the shape of the art on the right is repeated and mirrored in the corner, - lots to see in this.


W

helenlinda
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5 Jul 2012 - 10:21 PM
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Lovely composition and interplay of shadows - gets my UA too SmileSmileSmile
Helen

AnneWorner
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6 Jul 2012 - 1:44 AM
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Quote: Lovely composition and interplay of shadows - gets my UA too SmileSmileSmile
Helen

Thank you Helen for UA - very much appreciated! Smile

Anne

alsoppdigitalart
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6 Jul 2012 - 9:01 AM
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Looking at a work of art from both sides of the lens. superb in every detail

JOHN

pascalg
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6 Jul 2012 - 3:33 PM
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and he is in the right place too, for the comp.

Michaela_Solway
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6 Jul 2012 - 7:49 PM
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Excellent composition.. Like the tones, lines, simple but very effective .. Well done on awards

Richsr
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9 Jul 2012 - 7:13 PM
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Well seen and captured here Ann, works well
Regards Richard

Hop-A-Long
9 Jul 2012 - 8:47 PM
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Great composition.
The viewer appears engrossed in the artwork he is viewing whilst actually being viewed and becoming artwork himself.

Andy

AnneWorner
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10 Jul 2012 - 1:03 PM
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Good morning all - thanks for your time.

Andy, thanks for your UA! Smile

Anne

Source
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10 Jul 2012 - 11:42 PM
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Superb
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