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one of the 5 photos out of my series called Musica with the wonderful Seraphine Strange

Camera:Nikon D2X Check out Nikon Nation!
Lens:sigma 28-70 mm
Recording media:JPEG (digital)
Title:Cello
Username:peterkemp peterkemp
Uploaded:6 Mar 2010 - 3:00 PM
Tags:Cello, Model, Music, Portraits / people, Seraphine
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cassiecat
cassiecat  639 forum posts England46 Constructive Critique Points
6 Mar 2010 - 3:15 PM

love the tones and processing. the only niggle for me (and its a minor one) is with those shoes i'm not sure about the placement of the rear foot. and i know i am old cos i wouldnt even think about trying to stand up in those let alone walk lol.lesley

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photophantom
6 Mar 2010 - 3:30 PM

professionally done

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DOGSBODY
DOGSBODY  61432 forum posts England30 Constructive Critique Points
6 Mar 2010 - 4:24 PM

Excellent studio work. The scene is well thought out and arranged and all the elements work exceptionally well together. Andy

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polly470
polly470  525 forum posts United Kingdom8 Constructive Critique Points
6 Mar 2010 - 4:29 PM

No critique possible, only praise. Awesome, rich and beautiful photo. Shortlisted.
Pauline

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GregorP
GregorP  9 Slovenia
6 Mar 2010 - 4:56 PM

Awesome!!!
Gregor

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f8  119169 forum posts England22 Constructive Critique Points
6 Mar 2010 - 4:56 PM

Love it, excellent work.

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PhilT2
PhilT2 e2 Member 4104 forum postsPhilT2 vcard England14 Constructive Critique Points
6 Mar 2010 - 4:59 PM

Even if I tried really hard I dont think I could criticise this image. It is quite beautiful and the age and style of props together with the models perfect makeup and pose work so well. Even the wooden floor and backdrop enhance the image. For me this is as close to perfection as you can get. Brilliant work

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costas
costas e2 Member 7costas vcard Greece2 Constructive Critique Points
6 Mar 2010 - 5:36 PM

Fab work, well lit

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paulbroad
paulbroad  789 forum posts United Kingdom880 Constructive Critique Points
6 Mar 2010 - 5:43 PM

Really not for a criticsm section as you well know. First class technique and extremely high level of ability. Even name on front not too eye catching but would prefer it not there as I have to look.

Paul

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Oliverpants
Oliverpants e2 Member 5Oliverpants vcard England2 Constructive Critique Points
6 Mar 2010 - 6:08 PM

I have no criticsm, I think it is beautifully staged and lit and processed. Ann

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G3
G3  12 United States2 Constructive Critique Points
6 Mar 2010 - 7:05 PM

A capture of beauty and mood...well done

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wideangler
6 Mar 2010 - 7:30 PM

What a wonderful composition. So much care, so many interesting features. Outstanding. Faultless.

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olesyak
olesyak  7 Norway
6 Mar 2010 - 9:22 PM

Great composition and presentation

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banehawi
banehawi Critique Team 10986 forum postsbanehawi vcard Canada2984 Constructive Critique Points
6 Mar 2010 - 10:50 PM

Welcome to EPZ Peter.

This is a gorgeous, well posed shot, excellent lighting.

next time you post for critique, lets know you shot settings, and is youve applied toning ad youve done her so we dont accuse you of not having the correct WB!


The only suggestion I had is to leave her face untoned as in the mod.



Regards



Willie

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SuziBlue
SuziBlue  1216195 forum posts Scotland10 Constructive Critique Points
6 Mar 2010 - 11:19 PM

Just fab. I know you asked for critique but bear in mind that critique can be positive as well as constructive. So I'm going to award it a GE, so there Smile

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HectorRivera
7 Mar 2010 - 3:16 AM

Classi

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DeLone
DeLone  5
7 Mar 2010 - 12:15 PM

A beauty, like always heer Peter.

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kitsch
kitsch  8439 forum posts United Kingdom4 Constructive Critique Points
7 Mar 2010 - 12:21 PM

excellent....cannot fault this Smile

Last Modified By kitsch at 7 Mar 2010 - 12:21 PM

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BreadandShutter

STUNNING AS ALWAYS

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johnnyboy114
7 Mar 2010 - 5:18 PM

Just staggeringly good! Where have you been all my life! lol! This is inspirational stuff.....really something that only mere mortals can aspire to.....superb image in every way. Light, tones, set up, model, framing, everything....superb image!

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cassiecat
cassiecat  639 forum posts England46 Constructive Critique Points
7 Mar 2010 - 5:25 PM

been drawn back to this, it is classy and elegant.lesley

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LesF
LesF  8178 forum posts8 Constructive Critique Points
8 Mar 2010 - 12:18 PM

Wonderful shot and superb processing

LesF

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LeighRebecca
8 Mar 2010 - 1:07 PM

Everything about this is fantastic. Well deserving of all the praise and awards.

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victorburnside
8 Mar 2010 - 6:15 PM

Excellent work.
I am wondering, why you use JPG and not RAW?

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Geraint
Geraint  8715 forum posts Wales34 Constructive Critique Points
8 Mar 2010 - 10:12 PM

I know I posted a welcome note on another photo, but just wanted to say how fantastic it is to see such an inspirational photographer join EPZ. We will learn a lot from your work I'm sure.
Geraint

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photodoktor
11 Mar 2010 - 2:37 PM

Thats a cracking image in fact your PF is really good.

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digiphoto
digiphoto  1240 forum posts England12 Constructive Critique Points
11 Mar 2010 - 3:40 PM

Excellent image but with one exception. Those shoes !!!! they dont fit the era you trying to capture. Their more like a pole dancer's kit. Tony.

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Toonman
Toonman  71420 forum posts England2 Constructive Critique Points
13 Mar 2010 - 7:49 AM

Critique! Absoloutly wonderful.
Top notch.
Adam

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n.j.bailey
n.j.bailey  11
20 Jun 2010 - 10:19 AM

Love the juxtaposition of the model's prim pose and the 'cello, the most erotic of all instruments!

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