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Taken F8 1/250 iso 200 using 2 elemental 250 lights

Camera:Canon EOS 50D
Lens:Canon EFS 17-85mm
Recording media:JPEG (digital)
Title:Cier
Username:popeyebilly popeyebilly
Uploaded:19 Oct 2010 - 9:00 PM
Tags:Portraits / people
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fantastic boy lovely expression

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20 Oct 2010 - 8:29 AM

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20 Oct 2010 - 8:29 AM
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A great expression and vibrant colours make this a striking image but I personally think the crop is too loose. The blank space above his head is not needed, cropping in tight to the cap will put the eyes nearer the third and make the portrait more intimate. Personally I prefer 5 X 4 ratio for headshots as it concentrates the image more on the face.
I have uploaded a exampleof what I mean.

Andrew.

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paulbroad
20 Oct 2010 - 7:39 PM
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Getting much better - bit off the top, bit off the left very necessary. He looks happy as he should.

Paul

Thanks all for the comments and mod

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