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Taken on an outing yesterday evening, which was primarily about the sunset only that didn't really happen. Not to worry I enjoyed the evening and there were some very nice clouds around.

Many thanks for looking,

Jude

PS I've taken advice on the 'definition/drama' (thanks Nathan and Billy)in the sky and pumped it up a bit in V2 ~ what does anyone think?

Brand:Sony
Camera:Sony A580
Lens:DT 16-80mm F3.5-4.5 ZA
Recording media:RAW (digital)
Date Taken:8 Sep 2013 - 7:12 PM
Focal Length:18mm
Lens Max Aperture:f/3.5
Aperture:f/16.0
Shutter Speed:0.8sec
Exposure Comp:0.0
ISO:100
Exposure Mode:Aperture-priority AE
Metering Mode:Multi-segment
Flash:Off, Did not fire
White Balance:Manual
Title:Cloud over Burbage Edge
Username:DalesLass DalesLass
Uploaded:9 Sep 2013 - 5:43 PM
Tags:Burbage edge, Clouds, Landscape / travel, Rock
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NDODS
NDODS e2 Member 32873 forum postsNDODS vcard United Kingdom99 Constructive Critique Points
9 Sep 2013 - 6:16 PM

A stunning rugged landscape photographed so very well with both interest and quality throughout. "May be a little more definition in the sky perhaps?"

Regards Nathan GrinGrinGrin

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williamsloan
williamsloan e2 Member 3williamsloan vcard Northern Ireland1 Constructive Critique Points
9 Sep 2013 - 7:21 PM

a great shot a wee bit more drama in the sky and it would be super.[well done].


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Trevhas
Trevhas e2 Member 2408 forum postsTrevhas vcard United Kingdom3 Constructive Critique Points
9 Sep 2013 - 8:34 PM

Excellent capture of last nights dramatic clouds Judith. I was up on Higger tor looking over the Hope valley i agree that the sky could be printed in a bit more so it's V2 for me, i could up load a mod if you allow me to.
Trevor.

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DalesLass
DalesLass e2 Member 22018 forum postsDalesLass vcard United Kingdom
9 Sep 2013 - 8:48 PM


Quote: Excellent capture of last nights dramatic clouds Judith. I was up on Higger tor looking over the Hope valley i agree that the sky could be printed in a bit more so it's V2 for me, i could up load a mod if you allow me to.
Trevor.

Hi Trevor, many thanks for your comments. I have enabled modifications, so feel free, I'll be interested to see your take on it Smile

Jude

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DalesLass
DalesLass e2 Member 22018 forum postsDalesLass vcard United Kingdom
9 Sep 2013 - 9:34 PM

I like them both Trevor perhaps the first more so but I also think the extra contrast works too. I'll have another try with the original tomorrow.....

Jude

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Trevhas
Trevhas e2 Member 2408 forum postsTrevhas vcard United Kingdom3 Constructive Critique Points
9 Sep 2013 - 9:52 PM

Yeah its always difficult to choose but it's the one that you feel happy with which reflects the moment the best, i also prefer the first one which brings out the grittiness of the rocks but on reflection does not emphasize the sky as much as your V2 does. Good luck !!.
Trevor.

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Irishkate
Irishkate e2 Member 3Irishkate vcard United Kingdom73 Constructive Critique Points
9 Sep 2013 - 10:48 PM

I like very much your own V2 Jude - it makes quite a difference to the sky.
A lovely landscape which has converted weel to mono.
KateGrinGrinGrin

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dudler
dudler Critique Team 1091 forum postsdudler vcard England258 Constructive Critique Points
20 Sep 2013 - 12:41 PM

Partly, it's being there: and partly, it's showing it as you saw it (or, maybe, slightly better than you saw it!)

I'm with Trevor - the sort of shot you can spend a good while on perfecting: and possibly slightly easier to do in the darkroom, where burning-in and dodging are so much more intuitive - using hte shape of your hands to define the area, instead of a symmetrical blob!

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