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Taken in my school, as we were just fooling aroud, i spotted the texture of the metal forground, which interats with the light coming from the window.

Brand:Canon
Camera:Canon EOS 7D
Recording media:JPEG (digital)
Date Taken:2 Feb 2012 - 11:05 AM
Focal Length:17mm
Lens Max Aperture:f/4.0
Aperture:f/22.0
Shutter Speed:0.3sec
Exposure Comp:0.0
ISO:800
Exposure Mode:Aperture-priority AE
Metering Mode:Multi-segment
Flash:Off, Did not fire
Title:Clown
Username:leo_ms leo_ms
Uploaded:8 Feb 2012 - 9:43 PM
Tags:Architecture, Flash / lighting, Portraits / people
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Sooty_1
Sooty_1 Critique Team 41174 forum posts United Kingdom196 Constructive Critique Points
8 Feb 2012 - 11:19 PMConstructive Critique!This comment was flagged as constructive critique! 

Nice idea to play with. I like the texture of the metal, and this is quite interesting in itself.
I think next time I'd get my friend to go right to the doors at the far end, and maybe not throw some shapes, but just walk slowly toward you (somewhere near the far lockers). The silhouette would add mystery, whereas right now, it's just someone messing around. I'd try to square up the camera too, so there aren't leaning walls and lockers, unless you go the opposite way and really throw the angles out.

Nick

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KarenFB
KarenFB Junior Gallery Team 84245 forum postsKarenFB vcard England161 Constructive Critique Points
9 Feb 2012 - 7:28 AM

It may be the angle of the shot, but there doesn't look to be much headroom there! Is the ceiling really that low?! It is a well seen shot though and, as Nick has pointed out, you've found some lovely textures!

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paulbroad
paulbroad  681 forum posts United Kingdom840 Constructive Critique Points
9 Feb 2012 - 8:52 AM

I like the idea a lot. Assume you used a tripod at 1/3 sec as all but the figure is sharp. The problem for me is that parts of the figure are not distinct. I would have moved him back so as to be surrounded with light, then possibly exposed more for the bright light, dodging other areas to return detail.

Paul

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gavinrfuller
20 Mar 2012 - 5:28 PM

Wow you kids make me look useless (which I probably am). Fantastic shot.

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