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any tips will be very helpfull thankyou

Camera:Canon EOS 20D
Lens:18-55mm
Recording media:JPEG (digital)
Title:cyclamen
Username:darrene darrene
Uploaded:17 Oct 2010 - 5:26 PM
Tags:Flowers & plants, General, Wildlife / nature
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Alvar
Alvar  7 France2 Constructive Critique Points
17 Oct 2010 - 5:29 PM

Great shot. Well done.
Alvar

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debu  4 India
17 Oct 2010 - 5:47 PM

Lovely image.
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Jestertheclown
17 Oct 2010 - 8:03 PM

Hi Darenne,
This is really pretty good in a light, summery kind of way.
There's loads of colour, the background's nicely out of focus and you've got the blooms on a third.
However, it's a bit soft.
I've added a mod. in which I've sharpened it, tweaked the shadows/highlights a bit and added some contrast. I've also cropped it slightly to get rid of the distracting pink "bits" on the RHS.
Hope it's OK.

Bren.

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