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Another version of the previous shot, this is the one my son picked out. He was critiquing the shots for me and liked the eyes in this one. He also picked the variants. His main critique of this was that it's a bit too high key.

Camera:Canon EOS-1D MKIII
Lens:24-105mm
Recording media:JPEG (digital)
Title:Cycling
Username:whipspeed whipspeed
Uploaded:20 Dec 2008 - 3:31 PM
Tags:Flash / lighting, Portraits / people
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razer
razer  860 forum posts United Kingdom
20 Dec 2008 - 4:33 PM

Another lovley shot from you .Wasen't she good.
Ray

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SKavanagh
SKavanagh  6312 forum posts England5 Constructive Critique Points
20 Dec 2008 - 5:09 PM

Excellent set of shots sarah
Steve

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arhb
arhb e2 Member 72116 forum postsarhb vcard United Kingdom67 Constructive Critique Points
20 Dec 2008 - 5:12 PM

I read about this while I've been lurking on the tt forum recently.
I think cyclists in general will prefer to buy a calendar in this style than one filled with cycling on DC's (LOL)
This is good Sarah, V2 for me as it has more 'pop' to it.

Good luck with the project, and have a cool yule : )

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whipspeed
whipspeed e2 Member 94038 forum postswhipspeed vcard United Kingdom22 Constructive Critique Points
20 Dec 2008 - 5:22 PM

Thanks for the comments.


Thanks Andy, and yes, this has proved popular on the TT forum and got a few more interested. We now have 2 sponsors and 14 models, so hopefully it will work out Smile

Have a great Christmas and 2009 Season.

Sarah

Last Modified By whipspeed at 20 Dec 2008 - 5:22 PM

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gonedigital62
20 Dec 2008 - 6:09 PM

There's a nostalgic 70's feel to this trio upload Sarah, & the models pretty too, but I need my sunglasses on to enjoy it, now where did I put them.............

Last Modified By gonedigital62 at 20 Dec 2008 - 6:13 PM

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whipspeed e2 Member 94038 forum postswhipspeed vcard United Kingdom22 Constructive Critique Points
20 Dec 2008 - 8:12 PM

Yes, they are just a bit too high key, next session, that's something to sort out.

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DannyLenihan
21 Dec 2008 - 10:33 AMConstructive Critique!This comment was flagged as constructive critique! 


Quote: Yes, they are just a bit too high key, next session, that's something to sort out.

Not so. You've just under or overexposed it. I know that sounds daft, but when working in high key, the two manifest themselves in very similar ways. This is probably over, as there is a little light bleed around the edges of her hair.

Just add a little contrast Sarah, and lower the brightness.

V2 for me, because it looks bang on exposure-wise, and therefore jumps out at you. I know you've tried to hold this back to try and match it up with your template shot, but that was taken using pastel colours, and rather than allowing the light to soften it, they used a guassian blur.

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whipspeed e2 Member 94038 forum postswhipspeed vcard United Kingdom22 Constructive Critique Points
21 Dec 2008 - 11:10 AM

Thanks for the help Danny.

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monkeygrip
23 Dec 2008 - 2:25 PM

V2 for me it fills the space better a tighter crop than 1 & 3 making it more interesting.

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