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Great mono shot,love it,
great comp wonderful detail and tones a cracking mono nice one
Love the model but background is to cluttered and shafts of light are distracting!
Quote: Love the model but background is to cluttered and shafts of light are distracting!
Tend to agree
Great Shot, just love it.
I must admit that, like lonely_oryx, I agree with achieverswales. As it is, because the background is so distracting, your model does not stand out in the frame. I think your model would have stood out better if the photograph were in colour.
Furthermore, I think you have done well to position your model according to the Rule of Thirds, near enough. Well, not exactly in the centre of the frame, anyway. However, on the right-hand third, she is looking out of the frame. If she were to be positioned on the left-hand third, she would be looking into the frame, a better composition?
she is looking out of the frame. If she were to be positioned on the left-hand third, she would be looking into the frame, a better composition?
This is the first thing that caught my eye but I do like the pose. - gary
You have some good feedback to work with on this one, keep up the good work.
Very nice mono - I like the subject's positioning - I guess it depends how the view reads the image - to me she is looking back a little - the past - and there is a whole long future in front of her - but that is just my thought.
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