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Recording media:fomapan n21
Title:d.
Username:IgorKo IgorKo
Uploaded:7 Jan 2011 - 3:48 PM
Tags:Portraits / people, Woman
Votes:23

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saeidNL
saeidNL  4 Netherlands3 Constructive Critique Points
7 Jan 2011 - 4:01 PM

Great mono shot,love it,
saeid

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andylea
andylea  537 forum posts United Kingdom1 Constructive Critique Points
7 Jan 2011 - 4:07 PM

great comp wonderful detail and tones a cracking mono nice one Wink
andy

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achieverswales

Love the model but background is to cluttered and shafts of light are distracting!

Regards

Trev.

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lonely_oryx
lonely_oryx e2 Member 661 forum postslonely_oryx vcard England54 Constructive Critique Points
7 Jan 2011 - 6:52 PM


Quote: Love the model but background is to cluttered and shafts of light are distracting!

Regards

Trev.

Tend to agree

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AlanWillis
AlanWillis e2 Member 566 forum postsAlanWillis vcard England
8 Jan 2011 - 8:38 PM

Great Shot, just love it.
Alan

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PeterDSmith
PeterDSmith e2 Member 6PeterDSmith vcard United Kingdom46 Constructive Critique Points
9 Jan 2011 - 5:31 PMConstructive Critique!This comment was flagged as constructive critique! 

I must admit that, like lonely_oryx, I agree with achieverswales. As it is, because the background is so distracting, your model does not stand out in the frame. I think your model would have stood out better if the photograph were in colour.

Furthermore, I think you have done well to position your model according to the Rule of Thirds, near enough. Well, not exactly in the centre of the frame, anyway. However, on the right-hand third, she is looking out of the frame. If she were to be positioned on the left-hand third, she would be looking into the frame, a better composition?

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gary_d
gary_d e2 Member 6534 forum postsgary_d vcard Wales13 Constructive Critique Points
16 Jan 2011 - 1:08 PM

she is looking out of the frame. If she were to be positioned on the left-hand third, she would be looking into the frame, a better composition?
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This is the first thing that caught my eye but I do like the pose. - gary

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Richsr
Richsr e2 Member 790 forum postsRichsr vcard England209 Constructive Critique Points
27 Apr 2011 - 12:49 PM

You have some good feedback to work with on this one, keep up the good work.
Regrds Richard

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Suehh
Suehh  739 forum posts England6 Constructive Critique Points
28 Apr 2011 - 10:20 PM

Very nice mono - I like the subject's positioning - I guess it depends how the view reads the image - to me she is looking back a little - the past - and there is a whole long future in front of her - but that is just my thought.

Sues

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