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Photograph direct and pos process by me
Models me and Nathalie

Camera:Cannon 450D
Lens:55mm
Recording media:RAW (digital)
Title:Dark and Bright
Username:Allex2501 Allex2501
Uploaded:24 Aug 2009 - 6:50 PM
Tags:Portraits / people
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RickCar
RickCar  5 United Kingdom
24 Aug 2009 - 6:59 PM

Superb photo.. concept well executed!

Rick

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woodlark
woodlark e2 Member 10533 forum postswoodlark vcard United Kingdom1 Constructive Critique Points
24 Aug 2009 - 7:00 PM

Really like this, a bit gritty and the girls eyes connect so well.

Great capture.

Karl

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woodlark
woodlark e2 Member 10533 forum postswoodlark vcard United Kingdom1 Constructive Critique Points
24 Aug 2009 - 7:33 PM

Its not often I return to a shot but its so good, just had a look at your other photos and they have something about them that deserve compliments......
Really wanted to vote on them all. I find that people will still critic if you place them on the normal vote option plus you get a chance to boost your confidence as you find people enjoy what your photographing.

Keep up the good work.

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maryg
maryg e2 Member 666 forum postsmaryg vcard Scotland18 Constructive Critique Points
24 Aug 2009 - 8:20 PM

Really like the contrast in skin tones and the gritty image on the right of the shot. Love the girl's eyes , just gorgeous, a fab self portrait and really cleverly done .
Mary

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somnathchatterjee
25 Aug 2009 - 10:44 AMConstructive Critique!This comment was flagged as constructive critique! 

beautiful image and composition. i only have a problem with the use of cigar here because it is leading the eye to a different place. you could have used it in a different manner or excluded it. but it is only my view and i should say you have done a superb job here.

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NEWMANP e2 Member 61587 forum postsNEWMANP vcard United Kingdom574 Constructive Critique Points
26 Aug 2009 - 4:39 PMConstructive Critique!This comment was flagged as constructive critique! 

the only improvement to this would be if the cigar was glowing red and chuging copious quantities of smoke across the top and side and maybe even the male face in the dark zone, Nathalie is beautifully lit and presented. i like her bright eyes and yours dark,
this is a great image
Phil

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