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This shot was taken from the patio of the converted barn we stayed in near Slingsby, North Yorkshire. The sun was setting behind the buildings and produced some great rays of light. The tractor trails in the corn lead the eye into the shot and were gone the next evening when the combine harvester had been put to work.

Brand:Canon
Camera:Canon EOS 1000D
Lens:17-70mm
Recording media:RAW (digital)
Date Taken:18 Aug 2013 - 8:16 PM
Focal Length:50mm
Lens Max Aperture:f/3.8
Aperture:f/5.0
Shutter Speed:1/80sec
Exposure Comp:0.0
ISO:100
Exposure Mode:Program AE
Metering Mode:Center-weighted average
Flash:Off, Did not fire
White Balance:Manual
Title:Day is Done
Username:technical_tim technical_tim
Uploaded:2 Sep 2013 - 2:41 PM
Tags:Landscape / travel, Light, Sun, Sunset, Yorkshire
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christinecilia
christinecilia e2 Member 2christinecilia vcard England
2 Sep 2013 - 4:03 PM

lovely sky great photo. christineGrinGrinGrinGrinGrin

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banehawi Critique Team 10846 forum postsbanehawi vcard Canada2836 Constructive Critique Points
2 Sep 2013 - 5:36 PM

The scene is nice.

It looks a little too bright to me for a shot that includes the strong light in the sky. Overall impression is the buildings have been prioritized in the exposure, at the expense of the sky. Perhaps you would have been best to meter off the sky, and use these settings when the shot was recomposed, by taking advantage of the AE lock feature.


The result would look a little more like the mod Ive uploaded, - you have to view large, as it wont look good small.



regards



Willie

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