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Finalised image from the previous upload.

I've tagged it as digitally manipulated as there are a few B&W contrast layers involved in this and it's also a panoramic stitch from five shots although the format doesn't fit EPZ's idea of a panoramic so I've loaded it as a standard 1000 pixel.

Thanks for looking.

Recording media:RAW (digital)
Title:DEAR JOHN (final print)
Username:keithh keithh
Uploaded:18 Feb 2012 - 7:58 PM
Tags:Digitally manipulated, Flash / lighting, General, Letter, Light, Specialist / abstract, Story, Time, Watch
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mrswoolybill
mrswoolybill (Critique Team)
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133 forum postsmrswoolybill vcard United Kingdom340 Constructive Critique Points
18 Feb 2012 - 8:04 PM
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More nostalgic, less immediate without the pills. But I like the faded rose, I hadn't noticed that before...
The dark shadows extreme left and right are so much more satisfying than those cut-off diagonals...
Moira

Last Modified By mrswoolybill at 18 Feb 2012 - 8:04 PM
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Richsr
Richsr (e2 Member)
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88 forum postsRichsr vcard England177 Constructive Critique Points
18 Feb 2012 - 8:06 PM
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Lighting details tones all work well Keith.
Regards Richard.

BURNBLUE
BURNBLUE (e2 Member)
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BURNBLUE vcard 1 Constructive Critique Points
18 Feb 2012 - 8:10 PM
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Like it alot, only niggle is so many many bits and bobs in shot..eyes wander around with nothing to focus on. Would have been better if one main focal theme or point. But like the flavour or mood.

Simon.

keithh
keithh (e2 Member)
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21646 forum postskeithh vcard Wallis and Futuna23 Constructive Critique Points
18 Feb 2012 - 8:17 PM
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Cheers guys

These are being done as a commission for a large dining room. The client wanted large pieces that might create a talking point and in which you could spend time searching the picture and seeing the connections and the back story. The idea is that when you go back for a second look, you might see something you did not see before.

Philip_H
18 Feb 2012 - 8:23 PM
0

Wonderfully arranged and lit still life - full of interest at every point.

Philip

Leilani
18 Feb 2012 - 8:53 PM
0

Fabulous still life, very artistic and lovely highlighted and shaded areas. Nice one! Smile

WhiteRose1
WhiteRose1 (e2 Member)
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636 forum postsWhiteRose1 vcard England105 Constructive Critique Points
18 Feb 2012 - 9:00 PM
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So much of interest to see therein, and that is a superb bit of pipe smoke.

Dave

nonur
nonur (e2 Member)
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nonur vcard Turkey5 Constructive Critique Points
18 Feb 2012 - 9:30 PM
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Quote: Wonderfully arranged and lit still life - full of interest at every point.

Philip

I agree!

adentenur
19 Feb 2012 - 5:43 AM
0

lovely pic!
the detail of the shot is really awesome!

tigerminx
19 Feb 2012 - 10:08 AM
0

The final result is excellent Keith.
Bruce.

Nick_w
Nick_w (Critique Team)
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3336 forum postsNick_w vcard England86 Constructive Critique Points
19 Feb 2012 - 11:34 AM
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Thats a far more harmonious arrangement Keith. I like all the different elements - they support the main focal point (love the hour glass - time running out) I would like to see this large- couple of minor niggles - the cove where the globe is you can see the top of the bureau. It pulls the eye away. Also some of the dark recesses are little too dark (tho I guess that may be partly down to compression).

Nick

P.S. just seen this has got a very well deserved EC.

Last Modified By Nick_w at 19 Feb 2012 - 11:35 AM
BarbaraR
19 Feb 2012 - 2:49 PM
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Congrats on such a fine shot and well deserved
awards.

B.

keithh
keithh (e2 Member)
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21646 forum postskeithh vcard Wallis and Futuna23 Constructive Critique Points
19 Feb 2012 - 4:29 PM
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cheers you lot and to Pete for the EC-majig

ade_mcfade
19 Feb 2012 - 9:59 PM
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cool.... not usually fussed about still life, but this is rather lovely... that glass looks ace.

what you printing on - just done a load of 5 foot wide acrylic prints for the penthouse of the old Allders building on the Headrow - look really rather nice in that finish.. maybe a bit "modern" looking for this kind of image though.

BillyGoatGruff
BillyGoatGruff (e2 Member)
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188 forum postsBillyGoatGruff vcard England196 Constructive Critique Points
20 Feb 2012 - 9:41 AM
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Work of art....or, dare I say: Art! Wink

Bill

keithh
keithh (e2 Member)
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21646 forum postskeithh vcard Wallis and Futuna23 Constructive Critique Points
20 Feb 2012 - 12:45 PM
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Yeah - Fine Art, Bill
Wink

I think I might upload this tonight as a B&W panoramic.

Going to be on bonded alluminium, Ade

BEVZED
BEVZED (e2 Member)
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1126 forum postsBEVZED vcard United Kingdom
20 Feb 2012 - 11:37 PM
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Beautiful .... a few subtle changes and it is a completely different picture ....
(the lamp is wonderful!)

chris-p
chris-p (e2 Member)
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61 forum postschris-p vcard England
21 Feb 2012 - 7:24 PM
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Inspiring image Keith and so much to see and explore..

ade_mcfade
21 Feb 2012 - 9:12 PM
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oh nice - that'll look the bollox Smile

tepot
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4416 forum posts United Kingdom
13 Apr 2012 - 1:01 AM
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absolutely love the overall tones here Keith, a very warm scene, way too busy though making the eye wander from the theme.

Terry.

Last Modified By tepot at 13 Apr 2012 - 1:01 AM
779HOB
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734 forum posts United Kingdom
12 Jul 2012 - 8:27 AM
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Nice work - Was a toss up for me between the b/w version and this one. The title of Dear John made me think it was a letter from a women to a man - however the glass of whisky stopped me in my tracks - I don't associate whisky with a women (sexist I know). Was this a deliberate juxtaposition between the title and glass?

keithh
keithh (e2 Member)
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21646 forum postskeithh vcard Wallis and Futuna23 Constructive Critique Points
12 Jul 2012 - 8:51 AM
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The idea was indeed from a woman to man....hence the whisky - I don't mind being sexist Wink


The actual letter is to Uncle Willy from his dearest little Fanny.

779HOB
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734 forum posts United Kingdom
12 Jul 2012 - 8:54 AM
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And there again I made the wrong assumption! I was thinking the letter was being written not read! God I need some more coffee to wake up!

You have reading glasses not a pen too - I am blind this morning.

Last Modified By 779HOB at 12 Jul 2012 - 8:55 AM
keithh
keithh (e2 Member)
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21646 forum postskeithh vcard Wallis and Futuna23 Constructive Critique Points
16 Oct 2012 - 3:20 PM
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I know what you mean but then even the best still lifes in classical art are obviously staged and look that way.

It's getting the trade off between composition and 'how it might appear in life'. Be good fun on winter nights trying to get the ultimate result.

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