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Just another in a series I'm working on titled 'The Bureau' A much simpler lighting than the previous one.

Hope you're all good.

Title:DEAR JOHN
Username:keithh keithh
Uploaded:10 Feb 2012 - 6:49 PM
Camera:Nikon D300 Check out Nikon Nation!
Lens:Nikkor 50mm Check out Nikon Nation!
Recording media:RAW (digital)
Tags:Books, Bureau, Candle, General, Hidden meaning, Letter, Poison, Still life
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mrswoolybill
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10 Feb 2012 - 6:55 PM
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I like the balance between the present and the past in this. I first registered the books, the crucifix, the hour glass. Then a moment or so later the whisky, pills, smoking pipe. Last of all the bullets. Layers of association, thought-provoking.
Moira

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jaktis
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10 Feb 2012 - 7:14 PM
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Full of matching details

Peter

tigerminx
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10 Feb 2012 - 8:16 PM
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Very intriguing Keith, I like it.

keithh
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10 Feb 2012 - 8:47 PM
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Cheers guys

Very few views but there yer go

John_Horner
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10 Feb 2012 - 9:11 PM
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Long time no see Keith. A lovely set up. Great.
Hope ur keeping well.

John

Nick_w
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10 Feb 2012 - 9:29 PM
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Very poignant Keith. The implications are all there, not sure on the pills - they look too contemporary - the poison/medicine bottle would suffice (tho change the placement).

I like the pano crop (tho the cliped sides of the bureau fight the harmony). Its a shame images like this don't grab the attention of more - they don't know what they are missing.

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mrswoolybill
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10 Feb 2012 - 9:46 PM
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I've come back a time or two, thought more and more about this. I'm interested in what I noticed first, the well thumbed old books, Les Misérables coming in two volumes, the keys, the warm, cosy nostalgia (plus the bottle... ). The modern pills came as a real shock. I think they work and they're important, they're the here and now. They convey pain.
I'm with Nick on the clipped sides of the bureau though... That doesn't spoil the image, it just gives me something to niggle about.

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keithh
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10 Feb 2012 - 10:00 PM
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cheers guys

we'll have to see what people make of the final version when its ready

Nick_w
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10 Feb 2012 - 10:01 PM
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Quote: we'll have to see what people make of the final version when its ready

Can't wait ! But whats with the D70?

Last Modified By Nick_w at 10 Feb 2012 - 10:03 PM
keithh
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10 Feb 2012 - 10:10 PM
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LOL - no idea, the software decided that I had one. Wink I'm having to work on the pills digitally as Edwardian ones are pretty scarce.

Oh and thanks for the GE - my first ever I do believe.

rontear
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10 Feb 2012 - 11:08 PM
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Detailed and descriptive image Keith, beautiful tones.
Ron.

Richsr
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11 Feb 2012 - 10:59 AM
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Like the details but just wonder if there is too much to look at Wink
Regards Richard

matmonty
11 Feb 2012 - 11:58 AM
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I also think it is a well balanced image, especially like the wisp of smoke.

Mat.

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chase
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11 Feb 2012 - 3:59 PM
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Love the books & that wisp of smoke from the pipe.
Great content except the pills & they do jar a tad for me too.Bullets are good so what about a nice ole pistol to go with them instead of the booze & pills ?
Very Sherlock Holmes.
Fancy clipping the edges off...tut tut Mr H Wink

keithh
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11 Feb 2012 - 8:51 PM
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Some good points which will help me form the final shot.

I have to chop the edges off if I show the bureau as they are sloped Smile

BillyGoatGruff
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13 Feb 2012 - 10:26 AM
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Lovely image, Keith.

If/when you re-shoot this I think that actually including the sloping sides of the bureau would be a good thing, especially if you also include a little more of the surroundings.
They, along with the top and writing desk, would form a "world away" from what's outside, giving a kind of detachment and sense of pivate intimacy to the thoughts and feelings and identity implied and contained within the bureau itself.

My twopenneth worth, and an RC to add to your other acronym Smile

Bill

Jamieson86
14 Feb 2012 - 10:59 AM
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I love this style, althought it's a bit cliche-saturated, fantastic picture! Smile

keithh
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14 Feb 2012 - 2:11 PM
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I agree with the cliche point but we blokes are a bit straight down the line when it comes to photography and suicide.
Wink

BEVZED
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14 Feb 2012 - 8:09 PM
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I'd like for the front corners to be in shot too, that would probably give space either side of the spine reflections. The jarring bit for me is the candle, too clean and white, too sharp and high, no shadows cast from such a bright flame ....

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