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deep sleep

Brand:del lap topl web cam camera
Camera:dell laptop web cam camera
Title:deep sleep
Username:salmabush salmabush
Uploaded:25 Jan 2011 - 9:18 PM
Tags:Portraits / people
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Tooth
Tooth  95772 forum posts Ireland227 Constructive Critique Points
25 Jan 2011 - 11:39 PM

Hi Salma, welcome to EPZ. I noticw you've been a member since April, with no interaction on the site, then all of a sudden you load this into the critique gallery with no word of description as to what it's about. It's a very dark picture taken with a webcam showing juat a wee blob in one corner. What do you want me to say about it? What questions would you like answered or opinions given? What were you trying to achieve? You say on your PG page you hope to learn - give us some help and we may be able to help you more,
Stephen

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DeSilver e2 Member 7DeSilver vcard England11 Constructive Critique Points
26 Jan 2011 - 9:13 AM

Tooth is right. If you want to learn ask people like tooth or anyone with a medal against their name "Critique Points" and they will help or even anyone on the site. There are some very friendly people on site so give them a chance. I'm always asking questions and have never been refused a answer or pointed in the right direction to someone who can help! Smile

Give it a go.



David.

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paulbroad
paulbroad  782 forum posts United Kingdom860 Constructive Critique Points
26 Jan 2011 - 9:15 AM

Not at all sure what you want us to say here. I can't improve it.

Paul

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JamesGarfield
26 Jan 2011 - 9:37 AM

I looked at this for sometime before making any critique rather than rush into anything. I find the lighting is a little too bright on the subjects face causing some burnout which is a shame as she's a pretty model. The focus isn't as sharp as it could be so with my mod i'd changed the lighting, increased the saturation, sharpened the subjects eyes and cloned out the annoying light distraction just to the left of her face. Hope you like?

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yauimagery
26 Jan 2011 - 9:50 AM

haha classic James! I would under expose this a little and maybe add more shadow

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Grampy
Grampy  4507 forum posts England71 Constructive Critique Points
26 Jan 2011 - 1:46 PM

I will say nothing in fear of embarasing myself ! but on the other hand it'title is "deep sleep" and it's either a very brave first download at an attempt to be creative or , or or, no I won't say it
Phill

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salmabush
salmabush  4 Nigeria
28 Feb 2011 - 4:22 PM

well i took the picture in my bed room just when i was about to go to sleep,i had already put off the lights and i was trying to conclude with what i was doing,i went to the web cam page to click close when i noticed that i could see just one side of my face it was reflex i just clicked on the shutter button and there you are this image came up.i agree the light was very poor but i also want u to know that this could be what a face could look like when you are asleep in the dark.yeah poor attempt i agree again

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