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Taken looking south on a winters morning

Brand:Canon
Camera:Canon EOS 30D
Recording media:JPEG (digital)
Date Taken:28 Jan 2012 - 1:08 PM
Focal Length:55mm
Lens Max Aperture:f/5.6
Aperture:f/14.0
Shutter Speed:1/100sec
Exposure Comp:0.0
ISO:100
Metering Mode:Multi-segment
Flash:No Flash
Title:Derwentwater Keswick
Username:AdrianP AdrianP
Uploaded:6 Feb 2012 - 7:44 PM
Tags:Derwent, Landscape / travel
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Leilani
Leilani  1029 forum posts England3 Constructive Critique Points
6 Feb 2012 - 9:22 PM

Nice composition, colours are a bit muted, contrast could be more defined IMO, this image could really stick out with a bit of a warmer or cooler tone as you have the snow in the background. Smile

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paulbroad
paulbroad  781 forum posts United Kingdom850 Constructive Critique Points
6 Feb 2012 - 10:09 PM

The foreground is rather too bright I think, but the exposure is spot on for the background. which looks very nice. There are rather too many posts for my liking without any flow of planned composition.

Paul

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CathR
CathR  7139 forum posts United Kingdom563 Constructive Critique Points
7 Feb 2012 - 10:37 AM

I like the muted colours and agree with Paul that the background looks good. I also agree with him about the posts - they seem like an obstacle course that I need to get round rather than leading me into the picture.

best wishes

Catherine

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Niknut e2 Member 4560 forum postsNiknut vcard United Kingdom61 Constructive Critique Points
7 Feb 2012 - 4:16 PM

Lovely shot !!!....great 'wintery' feel to it, from the blue tones....& a nice depth created by the 'landing-stages' contrasting
with the distant hills.....works for me...top notch !!!

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mhfore
mhfore  7 England176 Constructive Critique Points
10 Feb 2012 - 3:02 PM

Hi Adrian,
First off you have captured a good subject here and to be fair there's not a lot wrong, most of it is down to personal opinion, such is the eye of the beholder. While I understand why you like the movement in the foreground water somtimes you have to sacrifice a bit to improve the image, as you will agree there is an area of the water that is too bright. If you look at the mod, I have reduced the water but increased the sky as this holds some detail also I have altered to tones a touch. Remember Adrian, always take images that please you. Grin

Martin

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