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I'm not sure about this. Out of season in Scarborough, but the sea front, in some areas, is rather run down and in poor repair. This family were in consultation, so I shot then converted to mono as it seemed to suite. Have done some burning in but could be too much and maybe needs more contrast?

EOS 7D with 18/125 OS Sigma at about 50mm. 1/125 @ f8 on aperture priority. OS on.

Paul

Camera:Canon EOS 7D
Lens:18/125 OS Sigma
Recording media:JPEG (digital)
Title:Desolate.
Username:paulbroad paulbroad
Uploaded:15 May 2012 - 4:40 PM
Tags:Desolation, Empty., Family, Mono, People, Portraits / people
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banehawi
banehawi Critique Team 10781 forum postsbanehawi vcard Canada2798 Constructive Critique Points
16 May 2012 - 6:00 PM

I think this works the way it is Paul. The composition really does work with the title.



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xwang
xwang  531 forum posts7 Constructive Critique Points
27 May 2012 - 1:52 PM

Hello Paul.
Another POV, not necessary better, just an idea.
Jas.

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paulbroad  681 forum posts United Kingdom843 Constructive Critique Points
28 May 2012 - 9:02 AM

I think your crop is better, Jas. I did consider doping that, but then left it alone - think you are right, though. A better composition.

Paul

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