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Foto yang menggambarkan tokoh cerita rakyat tanah Jawa, Indonesia, yaitu Dewi Sri tengah memberkati hamparan sawah petani agar mendapat panen yang bagus.

Camera:Nikon D40 Check out Nikon Nation!
Lens:Nikkor 18-50 Check out Nikon Nation!
Recording media:JPEG (digital)
Title:Dewi Sri Memberkati
Username:Alfonzoo Alfonzoo
Uploaded:30 Mar 2010 - 4:16 AM
Tags:Cerita rakyat, Digital art, Digital manipulated, Digitally manipulated, Dongeng, Folklore, Mystical
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Davesumner
30 Mar 2010 - 5:47 AM

This is a UK website so you're going to have to change your description to English otherwise nobody will know what your intentions are with the image and what you did to create it.

DaVeS

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Davesumner
30 Mar 2010 - 6:05 AM

I hope that Alfonzoo doesn't mind but I have had the comments translated and they are:

The photo describes a folk story from Java, Indonesia. Itís about Sri, a Goddess, blessing a farmerís field so it can produce a good harvest.

DaVeS

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paulbroad
paulbroad  681 forum posts United Kingdom840 Constructive Critique Points
30 Mar 2010 - 8:14 AM

Very poficient and imprssive. You must use English though - without the translation the meaning is lost. on't need the logo o th right.

Paul

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nishad1994
30 Mar 2010 - 10:58 AM

A very impressive photograph. The colours are very vibrant and strong !! Very nice work ... Smile
I agree about the logo on the top right corner.

Nishad

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clicknimagine
30 Mar 2010 - 11:51 AM

i came to know from the Daves comment, the meaning of the photograph, i like the arrangement of the butterflies and it does look like fibonacci spiral, though two butterflies are not completely in the frame,

the colors look a bit over saturated, and everything from the mountain to the sky and clouds look completely unnatural, as well as i can not understand whether the arrangement of the butterflies in this way helps your composition or not,

to me it is a creative attempt, but the execution is not that standard,

wish you best of luck for your future works...

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DRicherby
DRicherby  5269 forum posts United Kingdom725 Constructive Critique Points
30 Mar 2010 - 3:20 PM

Overall, I think this works very well. Obviously, it's not supposed to look natural but the bottom third is still maybe a bit too saturated. The spiral of butterflies does a good job of linking the image components together. It would be nice if the different butterflies had their wings open by different amounts, as if it was flying, but that would be very difficult to do.

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Paree
Paree  9594 forum posts3 Constructive Critique Points
30 Mar 2010 - 10:53 PM

hello Alfonzoo
I hope you can understand this
I have made a mod for you

i have desaturated it and remove some of the butterflies,

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