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"Do sol" waterfall.
A long exposure picture.
F16 /20s - 19mm - iso 100.

What could I do to improve this picture?

Thanks,

Brand:Canon
Camera:Canon EOS 60D
Lens:Tamron 17-50mm Check out Totally Tamron!
Recording media:RAW (digital)
Date Taken:8 Jul 2013 - 4:54 PM
Focal Length:19mm
Lens Max Aperture:f/2.8
Aperture:f/16.0
Shutter Speed:20sec
Exposure Comp:0.0
ISO:100
Exposure Mode:Manual
Metering Mode:Multi-segment
Flash:Off, Did not fire
White Balance:Manual
Title:"Do sol" waterfall
Username:luizdasilva luizdasilva
Uploaded:24 Jul 2013 - 1:42 PM
Tags:Blur, Cascade, Fall, Flow, Flowing, Foliage, Forest, Fresh, Landscape / travel, Water, Whaterfall
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TSP
TSP  6 England1 Constructive Critique Points
24 Jul 2013 - 2:36 PMConstructive Critique!This comment was flagged as constructive critique! 

Exposure looks good, I think you just need to work on the composition of the image. It could do with something in the foreground, but the rock that is there at the moment looks like its trying to sneak into shot rather than being framed there. It also gives the image a slightly unbalanced feeling. So if you get a chance to go to this location again try and find something of interest to stick in the front of the image, for example more of the rock in the bottom left.

Another alternative is try framing tighter and just have the falls and not include any or very little of the pool.

just my thoughts, Trev Smile

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christinecilia
christinecilia e2 Member 2christinecilia vcard England
24 Jul 2013 - 3:30 PM

i like this a lot love the dreamy water great photo. christineGrinGrinGrinGrinGrin

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banehawi
banehawi Critique Team 10829 forum postsbanehawi vcard Canada2833 Constructive Critique Points
24 Jul 2013 - 4:02 PMConstructive Critique!This comment was flagged as constructive critique! 

TSP has provided very good feedback.

the exposure is great, the composition has the waterfall too central in the frame. Just requires a crop from the left, - Ive uploaded a mod, and used a frame to fill in to get closer to 1000 pixels.

It is a little too sharp in the area of foliage to the left of the water (camera left) so that has been reduced in the mod.



regards



Willie

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paulbroad
paulbroad  781 forum posts United Kingdom850 Constructive Critique Points
25 Jul 2013 - 7:06 AM

I rather like this as presented. Just shows how opinions vary subjectively. We do see rather too many milky water shots, bu this one is technically a long way in front of most.

Paul

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