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Taken from 5 images, i'm not 100% about the sky colour as i had to get the colour back and being colour blind, it can be a problem haha thx for looking Smile

Camera:Nikon D40 Check out Nikon Nation!
Lens:AF-S Nikkor 18-55mm Check out Nikon Nation!
Recording media:JPEG (digital)
Title:Doctors Gate
Username:Stubeee Stubeee
Uploaded:20 Mar 2009 - 1:26 PM
Tags:Digitally manipulated, Landscape / travel, Wildlife / nature
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banehawi
banehawi Critique Team 10986 forum postsbanehawi vcard Canada2983 Constructive Critique Points
20 Mar 2009 - 8:14 PMConstructive Critique!This comment was flagged as constructive critique! 

Its a nice shot, - I like the composition.

It does seem a little flat overall, and lacks colour, - so Im guessing your intention was not to desaturate, but your not certain as your colour blind?

I have loaded a mod with the colour balanced a little using curves, contrast increased, and saturation increased +14 using Photoshop.

No sure if you will notice a big difference, but to me its more dramatic, and has more energy.



Regards


Willie

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Stubeee
Stubeee  5 United Kingdom
21 Mar 2009 - 8:58 AM

WOW ! that makes a huge difference ! it is more shades that affect me which knocks my confidence with messing too much with colour but i think i have to bite the bullet and utilies curves more and saturation , thx for taking the time to critique my work , i have just improved a little Smile (i hope) Stu

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boony
boony  8978 forum posts United Kingdom3 Constructive Critique Points
25 Mar 2009 - 12:21 AMConstructive Critique!This comment was flagged as constructive critique! 

nice shot stu. i would say that all the above stands mate. i like the clouds in it. could do with some foreground interest , rock , tree , discarded shoe etc etc. i would have selected the broken ground at the front of the shot to the left of the frame and fiddled with curves to lift the texture out of it. if im being very very picky i would also have tried to get rid of the jet trail , having said that i often leave them in because i cant be arsed cloning them out! maybe going back at golden hour could yield some nice colours too

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Stubeee
Stubeee  5 United Kingdom
8 Apr 2009 - 9:46 PM

Thx boony Smile

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