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This is, of course, the Red Arrows! Flying at Farnborough airshow yesterday, 14/7/12, and, as they normally are, were fantastic!

Brand:FUJIFILM
Camera:Fujifilm Finepix HS10
Recording media:JPEG (digital)
Date Taken:15 Jul 2011 - 4:02 PM
Focal Length:24.9mm
Lens Max Aperture:f/2.8
Aperture:f/5.0
Shutter Speed:1/420sec
Exposure Comp:0.0
ISO:100
Exposure Mode:Program AE
Metering Mode:Multi-segment
Flash:Off, Did not fire
Title:Does this actually need a tittle?
Username:GeorgeA1 GeorgeA1
Uploaded:15 Jul 2012 - 9:02 PM
Tags:Arrow, Hawk, Plane, Red, Red arrows planes air show, Transport
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KarenFB
KarenFB Junior Gallery Team 84277 forum postsKarenFB vcard England163 Constructive Critique Points
15 Jul 2012 - 9:04 PM

Brilliantly caught, a lovely composition!

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canonfan
canonfan  4 United Kingdom
15 Jul 2012 - 9:31 PM

Fantastic capture
Jim

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Carabosse
Carabosse e2 Member 1139430 forum postsCarabosse vcard England269 Constructive Critique Points
15 Jul 2012 - 11:39 PM

Hi George - good to see you posting your photos on here again. Smile

Great capture. In the mod I've uploaded for you, I've brightened the sky up a bit: take a look and see what you think.

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GeorgeA1
GeorgeA1  3 United Kingdom
16 Jul 2012 - 12:13 AM

Ah, yes, that looks really nice, I do mostly try to not edit any of my photos. The only edit I did in this one was a slight sharpen. Was needed as taking pictures of planes on cloudy days makes the edges funny. But looks nice! Will consider it with one of the other 1500 photos I got on the day. Grin

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jamestheboy
16 Jul 2012 - 5:55 PM

Very well done I could make this a very good out of bounds photo







james Smile

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javam
javam  91083 forum posts United Kingdom19 Constructive Critique Points
21 Jul 2012 - 11:51 PM

Hi George, the composition works well.

No shame in editing them. Every single one of my airshow shots gets at least some editing.

I would take a slightly different approach to CB though. The overcast conditions have muted the colours so I would increase the saturation a bit to make the red of the red arrows 'pop' a bit more. I think the brightness of the sky is about right, however I would focus on trying to pull some detail out of the shadows in the underneath of the aircraft so they do not look as dark against it. A levels tweak is all it would take or a curve adjustment if you have software that allows you to do it.

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