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Thanks as always
Dianna

Title:DONT SHOOT KIDS
Username:Diana Diana
Uploaded:24 May 2008 - 8:09 PM
Camera:Nikon D70 Check out Nikon Nation!
Lens:18-70mm
Recording media:JPEG (digital)
Tags:At, Coral, Fight, Flash / lighting, Gun, Humour / fun, Jack, James, Ok, Portraits / people, Shoot. studio lighting, The, Western
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Fab - love it
Liz x

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Silverzone
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24 May 2008 - 8:35 PM
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This has natural charm well taken. Sylvia

Fun shot but you might want to keep an eye on that kid. LOL

Diana
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24 May 2008 - 8:42 PM
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thanks Liz, Sylvia and Cherry yep, your right, he has not even started school yet, Jeesh they do start early dont they ? I blame MTV myself Smile

Dianna

Last Modified By Diana at 24 May 2008 - 8:42 PM

light moment..............

cantona43
24 May 2008 - 9:37 PM
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superb shot (pardon the pun) the sepia toning works fantastic as it gives the feeling of the wild west
Neil

Wonderful image, great fun. Love the toning and lighting

Mark

Last Modified By User_Removed at 24 May 2008 - 9:48 PM
Diana
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24 May 2008 - 10:03 PM
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thanks again, Jack and James really got into role today.. was such a lot of fun.. had to be sepia didn't it.... Smile

Dianna

SpeedAltStar
24 May 2008 - 10:30 PM
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Me thinks you could be a bad influence Smile

csr
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24 May 2008 - 11:12 PM
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Like it nice one
Chris

imagio
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25 May 2008 - 12:17 AM
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Tell them Dianna its a great shot, they will smile a lot with this one..betcha!!

Bernie

RogBrown
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25 May 2008 - 12:25 AM
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Tsk tsk. Kids with toy guns in this day & age? Very non-PC!! They'll probably grow up into serial killers!!
Lovely shot. Kids playing like they should & we used to do years ago before the do-gooders put a stop to it. The sepia works well too. Love it.
Rog

Diana
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25 May 2008 - 12:28 AM
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Quote: Me thinks you could be a bad influence

who me?

Quote: Very non-PC!!

yep! thats why I love it Smile

Quote: they will smile a lot with this one..betcha!!

let's hope so
thanks all
Dianna

franfoto
25 May 2008 - 1:18 AM
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Great shot and I love the toning. Looks like they were so involved that they forgot the camera was there. Very natural.
Fran

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25 May 2008 - 2:58 AM
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Nice set up, good exposure.
Brian

IFIMAGE
25 May 2008 - 6:43 AM
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Great work, fantastic shot! "pardon the pun"
Ian...

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25 May 2008 - 6:47 AM
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Great shot, might not be politically correct but who cares. This is one people will either love or hate because of it
Christine

BERTRAM
25 May 2008 - 8:38 AM
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this is a very well composed shot,

bayleaf
25 May 2008 - 9:25 AM
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Well done

John

millymcb
25 May 2008 - 10:53 AM
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Really great composition, boys being boys.

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25 May 2008 - 11:14 AM
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non PC - is that someone who doesn't have a computer? Smile

Very well arranged

fossilized
25 May 2008 - 11:56 AM
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LOL!
Jean

taggart
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25 May 2008 - 2:04 PM
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Well, I am worried about the child holding the gun-- upside down

Looks like a good time, well done, curious about what the parents said!

Jennnn

Diana
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25 May 2008 - 3:08 PM
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thanks all, must admit I was a bit worried as I uploaded..but I thought it was soooo funny, think it is one of my own faves now.

Jennnn he's blowing the smoke from the barrell after the shoot, don't you watch westerns? Tsk tsk !! Smile

Dianna

stix
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25 May 2008 - 4:02 PM
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Oh Dear Dianna
The lighting is all over the place!
You have bright spots either side, or a dull bit in the middle depending on how you view it. You must move the lights around until you can see the background is lit evenly. In this case you probably needed to move them further away to get a wider spread to cover the bit in the middle. At least you seem to have avoided glare and spill from these lights, so that's good.
I suggest you practice lighting the background and get it right before your models arrive, that way you can set up without feeling pressured. I recommend shooting tethered so you can see when the lighting is good. If you cant do this, then check the histogram/blinking overexposure this would have shown up the unevenness that you have.

The set up is fun. My only niggle, the way the kid is holding the gun, it looks like he is just about to blow his head off, that is not the way a cowboy holds a gun when he has just shot someone! If the idea is that he is blowing the smoke off, the gun should be the other way around. I know I'm sounding like a pedant but hey.
HTH
Martin

Last Modified By stix at 25 May 2008 - 4:06 PM
Diana
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25 May 2008 - 4:17 PM
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Oh crikey is it that bad Martin I thought it was a bit bright, as the stripes in his t shirt are not defined. When my laptop is out of intensive care I will set up to shoot and view, have uploaded the set up behind this one, re: the niggle about the gun. he's a kid, and only three, you kind of have to take what you get i think..would take too long to explain how to hold a gun Smile
thanks for the critique though
Dianna

stix
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25 May 2008 - 4:47 PM
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Think of it as 2 lighting setups, one for the background one for the subject. I cant see much wrong with your set up, the lights just needed to be angled more sharply so that you didn't miss a bit in the middle.
Re the set up, For me its attention to detail that really makes a difference. I know he's not really a cowboy, ( he's not even wearing any shoes), that's Suspension of disbelief. However he can hold the gun properly, why do you have to explain it? Your the director!
I would have moved the gun on the floor away from the hat for separation and why is the barrel removed? It might have worked better if he was still holding the gun.
Martin

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26 May 2008 - 2:09 PM
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can't speak for the lighting but I love this shot, classic

wyatturp
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26 May 2008 - 7:52 PM
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Well done time for some beans-LOL

Doug

Diana
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26 May 2008 - 9:55 PM
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thanks all, lol @ Doug

Dianna

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29 May 2008 - 11:13 AM
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I can understand Jack's parents, you've done a great job earlier and I still remeber those Smile And I like this one too, looks like some really good fun!

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30 May 2008 - 9:57 AM
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They look great!!
Helen

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