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..The future for Dorothy & Timothy is in the balance



part of the nightmaresanddaydream series
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Recording media:RAW (digital)
Title:Dorothy & Timothy ... Equilibrium
Username:Nick_w Nick_w
Uploaded:6 May 2012 - 2:09 PM
Tags:Black & white, Digital art, Digitally manipulated, General, Humour / fun, Specialist / abstract
Votes:31

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PinkK
PinkK  580 forum posts United Kingdom1 Constructive Critique Points
6 May 2012 - 2:28 PM

The thumbnail doesn't do this justice. Very creative, love it!

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TrevBatWCC
TrevBatWCC e2 Member 6TrevBatWCC vcard England8 Constructive Critique Points
6 May 2012 - 3:00 PM

Brilliant bit of work, Nick, love it! Wink
Trev Smile

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SlowSong
SlowSong e2 Member 64838 forum postsSlowSong vcard England29 Constructive Critique Points
6 May 2012 - 3:29 PM

Timothy all alone! Sad I'm sure they'll be OK because we care about them.
Superb piece of work. You tell a story with emotion in a minimalist and very engaging way.
Chris

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NDODS
NDODS e2 Member 43678 forum postsNDODS vcard United Kingdom107 Constructive Critique Points
6 May 2012 - 4:28 PM

A great piece of work, high quality manipulation, clearly very talented.

Regards Nathan

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marktc
marktc e2 Member 459 forum postsmarktc vcard United Kingdom13 Constructive Critique Points
6 May 2012 - 5:04 PM

great piece of artwork... nicely put together

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cdm36
cdm36 e2 Member 10391 forum postscdm36 vcard England7 Constructive Critique Points
6 May 2012 - 5:22 PM

Cracking piece of work Smile

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Eviscera
Eviscera e2 Member 81105 forum postsEviscera vcard United Kingdom149 Constructive Critique Points
6 May 2012 - 5:35 PMConstructive Critique!This comment was flagged as constructive critique! 

Id have a rework on this mate.

Its got superb mood and surrealism, but the sum of the parts don't really gel the whole.

The eye isnt allowed to settle on a focal point , chairs seem confused between balanced and interlocking (drop the middle one , it has no shadow from the soucelight behind) and the sky looks rather to obviously mirrored/flipped. Maybe patch and lose the symmetry.

Feathers Smile

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Nick_w
Nick_w e2 Member 74062 forum postsNick_w vcard England99 Constructive Critique Points
7 May 2012 - 5:58 PM

First thanks everyone - and a big thanks Chris for the UA Smile

Thanks as always Dave for your honesty. I deliberately left it a while before responding as I was hoping for a couple of other constructive comments to balance.

Re the shadow, it is there, tho probably not dark enough. Looking again, maybe the whole images bit dark, and I think I should lose the tarot cards (cant really make them out at 1000px anyway), hand and rearrange the chairs with the middle one forward facing.

The symmetry was meant as reflected in the title. But if I rework I will take on board your comments, and probably change the title. But one question feathers??

Last Modified By Nick_w at 7 May 2012 - 5:59 PM

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LesF
LesF  8178 forum posts8 Constructive Critique Points
7 May 2012 - 6:39 PM

It is a tadge dark Nick, not sure either about the clouds being mirrored but excellent skills once again creating this.


LesF

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