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Another from the shoot with Alex

Brand:Canon
Camera:Canon EOS 500D
Lens:EF50mm f/1.8 II
Recording media:JPEG (digital)
Date Taken:14 Oct 2011 - 12:00 PM
Focal Length:50mm
Lens Max Aperture:f/1.8
Aperture:f/1.8
Shutter Speed:1/500sec
Exposure Comp:0.0
ISO:100
Exposure Mode:Aperture-priority AE
Metering Mode:Multi-segment
Flash:Off, Did not fire
Title:DREAMY
Username:jjpix jjpix
Uploaded:27 Oct 2012 - 9:20 AM
Tags:Autum leaves, Beautiful, Model, Portraits / people, Red
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banehawi
banehawi Critique Team 10933 forum postsbanehawi vcard Canada2947 Constructive Critique Points
27 Oct 2012 - 10:18 PM

Really nice. Hard to get any area sharp with f/1.8, but you have the important areas, the eyes right on. I love the wisp of hair blowing off to the right. It can be sharpened a little before you upload; check sharpness after you re size, as re sizing usually causes loss of detail, then sharpen, then upload.

I suggest a different crop with the same aspect ratio, - and to do that Ive added space to the left to mover her off centre. I did apply a little sharpening also. Canon can often tend to produce skin tones that are a little too red, and I find that reducing red. by increasing cyan using colour balance, and applying to her skin only, does help.

You will soon be winning awards for your shots, - just a little more work!


regards


Willie

Last Modified By banehawi at 27 Oct 2012 - 10:19 PM

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jjpix
jjpix  3 United Kingdom
28 Oct 2012 - 12:53 PM

Thanks Wille
I am finding your advice so helpful, really appreciated. Grin

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