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Brand:Nikon CORPORATION
Camera:Nikon D200 Check out Nikon Nation!
Lens:70-300mm f/4-5.6 D
Recording media:JPEG (digital)
Date Taken:11 Apr 2010 - 10:11 AM
Focal Length:195mm
Lens Max Aperture:f/4.8
Aperture:f/29.0
Shutter Speed:1/25sec
Exposure Comp:0.0
ISO:100
Exposure Mode:Shutter speed priority AE
Metering Mode:Spot
Flash:No Flash
Title:Ebruli sardunyalar
Username:izida izida
Uploaded:20 Apr 2011 - 3:45 PM
Tags:Flowers & plants
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SUE118
SUE118 e2 Member 6SUE118 vcard United Kingdom1 Constructive Critique Points
20 Apr 2011 - 4:48 PM

Superb.

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paulbroad
paulbroad  681 forum posts United Kingdom843 Constructive Critique Points
20 Apr 2011 - 6:32 PMConstructive Critique!This comment was flagged as constructive critique! 

The expose on the flower blloms is correct this time, but they seem suspended in space to me. I would like a slightly lighter background with the suggestion of stems and leaves. i would also tend to have the blooms nearer the left with space to the right - as the eye sees.

Paul

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iancrowson
iancrowson e2 Member 4209 forum postsiancrowson vcard United Kingdom128 Constructive Critique Points
20 Apr 2011 - 9:29 PM

I looked at this image earlier and agreed with Paul. Looking again I can just see some leaves which add a lot to the balance. The colours are good although on my screen I'm losing detail in some of the white areas.
Its a pretty image and attractive image but I feel it stil needs more background detail to make it work.
regards, Ian

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Jestertheclown
20 Apr 2011 - 9:40 PM

I have to agree with what's been said above.
I've uploaded a mod. in which I've adjusted it using the shadows/highlights tool. In fact, I diodn't even move the sliders!
I've also cloned out some bits of leaf and stuff that was hidden in the dark around the edges.
And sharpened it.
Now I've done that though, I can't help thinking there's something not quite right about the composition.
I want to turn it upside down!

Hope this helps.

Bren.

Edit: I've uploaded a second mod. in which I've turned it over.

Last Modified By Jestertheclown at 20 Apr 2011 - 9:44 PM

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izida
izida  5 Turkey
21 Apr 2011 - 7:15 AM

To support and assist me in a positive direction to Friends would like to thank all the

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iancrowson
iancrowson e2 Member 4209 forum postsiancrowson vcard United Kingdom128 Constructive Critique Points
21 Apr 2011 - 10:20 AM

I would say the third mod by Frank has done the trick. The leaves give it a sense of being and the topaz filter seems to have returned some details to the white areas.
regards
Ian

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