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Another from the shoot with Eden. All natural light, reflectors and very little processing. Her hair really IS that colour....

Brand:Canon
Camera:Canon EOS 7D
Lens:EF50mm f/1.8 II
Recording media:RAW (digital)
Date Taken:21 Apr 2012 - 12:41 PM
Focal Length:50mm
Lens Max Aperture:f/1.8
Aperture:f/2.2
Shutter Speed:1/400sec
Exposure Comp:+1
ISO:200
Exposure Mode:Aperture-priority AE
Metering Mode:Multi-segment
Flash:Off, Did not fire
Title:Eden #2
Username:johnnyboy114 johnnyboy114
Uploaded:23 Apr 2012 - 6:22 PM
Tags:Flash / lighting, General, Portraits / people
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dathersmith
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23 Apr 2012 - 6:42 PM
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Great image Johnny love the pose and eye contact, a shame the light on her arm is blown but still a fine image.

Darren.

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saeidNL
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23 Apr 2012 - 6:45 PM
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WOOOOO
What fantastic work,love it,
saeid

Yeah, got a couple liket that Darren...the light was pretty strong and couldn't get it right through the window to light her face enough without making a compromise with the light somewhere....a bit annoying and I might try "burning" it later, but I liked it all the same. Thanks Darren, appreciated! Smile

newy17
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273 forum posts United Kingdom
23 Apr 2012 - 6:49 PM
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Love the Eye contact Johnny Wink

Cheers Ian! Smile

damn that is pretty yummy. great shot

Eviscera
Eviscera (e2 Member)
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23 Apr 2012 - 7:36 PM
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You have a great model there Johnnyboy , like the direct stare , directed it well !

stix
stix (e2 Member)
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23 Apr 2012 - 9:44 PM
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This is so nearly a really eye catching photo.
But it is spoiled by the knuckle, it looks ugly. Maybe you could clone it out.
As has been said, too bright on the arm , and the face could do with a tad toning down.
But I reallly like the colours and the pose, the tats and the attitude.

johnnyboy114
23 Apr 2012 - 10:34 PM
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All fair points Martin. Unfortunately my PS skills probably wouldn't stretch to successfully and cleanly cloning out the knuckles seamlessly. Wish I knew how to properly do that. The arm
I might be able to "burn" a little, as with the face in places. But as I am so poor at post processing I am scared of making a hash of the photo. May have a go and see what I can come up with.

its all about the eye contact. It lures you in and all other points raised are forgivable

paskinmj
24 Apr 2012 - 9:08 AM
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Another brilliant image from this shoot John. Great natural pose captured. Agree with above comments re her thumb and burnt out arm, but does not distract too much from this capture too much. I like the fact that the lighting looks both soft and harsh at the same time. Good work. One of your best.
Matt

Oh just noticed. Congrats on your RC!

Cheers Dave and Matt.....I hope I am getting there.... Smile

Scaramanga
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24 Apr 2012 - 10:05 AM
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Excellent works for me.

johnnyboy114
24 Apr 2012 - 11:26 AM
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Thank you Smile

Richsr
Richsr (e2 Member)
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88 forum postsRichsr vcard England180 Constructive Critique Points
26 Apr 2012 - 7:04 PM
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Good eye connection and great hair, crop in hard from the RHS to the top of her shoulder really get those eyes as the point of focus
Regards Richard

Hmmmm....thats an interesting and different take on that issue Richard and one I might try....not really thought of that alternative. Thanks! Will have a look at that.

agean
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3 Aug 2012 - 4:42 PM
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One of your best for me, great shot with plenty of attitude.

Thank you Keith. I like this one a lot too. One of my faves Smile Glad you like it. Appreciated

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