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Out on walk with dog on the chase, when i caught this exposure.

hope you like? comments more than welcome. thanks.

Recording media:JPEG (digital)
Title:Electrifying
Username:ghosts ghosts
Uploaded:21 Jan 2012 - 2:16 PM
Tags:Landscape / travel, Nature/silhouette/general
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Jestertheclown
21 Jan 2012 - 7:52 PM

I rather like this.
The idea of utilising the pylons to draw your eye into the image works quite well, I reckon.
The sky's a little bright, in fact, the brightest area in the centre is a bit of a distraction but a few adjustments with the shadows/highlights tool claw back some detail whilst making the sky more ominous than it already is.
Had you considered a mono conversion?
I've added a couple of mods.
In one, I've turned down the highlights a little and increased the shadows.
The other mod. is a duo-tone (soft grey) version of the first one.
I think that it's one of those images that you could play with in software for ages and not decide quite which version you like the best.
All done using CS5.
Hope this helps.

Bren.

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paulbroad
paulbroad  681 forum posts United Kingdom825 Constructive Critique Points
22 Jan 2012 - 1:43 PM

I quite like this and your composition. I assume you have added some blue for effect. I think it will look even better rather bigger.

paul

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ghosts
ghosts  3 United Kingdom
23 Jan 2012 - 6:46 AM

hi, thanks for feed back, do like the mods,

not quite the electrifying effect though.

hi paul, no blue was added, just a touch of black and sharpen. image was taken as seen in raw.

did take a touch of brightness a way due to burn out near brightest part.

thanks again all

lee.

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