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This is the last im posting now of Elena and the outdoor location shoot in wilts

Please post c&c.

Thanks for looking


Mk

Camera:Nikon D200 Check out Nikon Nation!
Lens:18-70mm
Recording media:RAW (digital)
Title:Elena 4
Username:hook hook
Uploaded:30 Nov 2008 - 2:14 PM
Tags:General, Nude / glamour, Portraits / people, Urban decay model
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Simon-Gimson
Simon-Gimson e2 Member 8236 forum postsSimon-Gimson vcard England1 Constructive Critique Points
30 Nov 2008 - 2:46 PM

top shot again


Si

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cnorris
cnorris e2 Member 6cnorris vcard England2 Constructive Critique Points
30 Nov 2008 - 2:58 PM

stylish!

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dazzaman
dazzaman e2 Member 8630 forum postsdazzaman vcard England
30 Nov 2008 - 3:40 PM

12 votes and only 3 comments, CRIMINAL.
WELL DONE
daz

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Simon-Gimson
Simon-Gimson e2 Member 8236 forum postsSimon-Gimson vcard England1 Constructive Critique Points
30 Nov 2008 - 7:24 PM

well doe on both the h.c


Si

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k_words
k_words e2 Member 8k_words vcard United Kingdom2 Constructive Critique Points
30 Nov 2008 - 9:55 PM

Spot on ! Love it !
Terry

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hook
hook e2 Member 7706 forum postshook vcard England
30 Nov 2008 - 10:06 PM

2 HCs in 2 days!, I well made up. thanks to all for the support.

Mk

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HowardA
HowardA e2 Member 7231 forum postsHowardA vcard
30 Nov 2008 - 10:50 PM

Great set-up and good job with the lighting. Congrats.

Howard

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User_Removed
1 Dec 2008 - 2:54 AM

A good photo. A very good photo.

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onebeautifulmoment
onebeautifulmoment e2 Member 6onebeautifulmoment vcard United Kingdom16 Constructive Critique Points
1 Dec 2008 - 7:57 AMConstructive Critique!This comment was flagged as constructive critique! 

Hi This is another great shot – you have asked for c & c so here are some Very MINOR observations. The colours are beautiful in this but I find the white graffiti is a little bit dominant –could it be toned down a bit. Some rim lighting (very difficult outside with portable kit) would have just separated her a little from the background. Cropping slightly more to the right may have put more weight to the story of finding the roses in such a hopeless place? All these things are so easy to spot after the event!!!! Ether way is a cool shot as it is… I would have been very pleased with it! I am also honoured to be click no 30!

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hook
hook e2 Member 7706 forum postshook vcard England
1 Dec 2008 - 10:55 AM

thanks for the constructive critique wayne. I may do waht you say and see how it looks


Mk

Last Modified By hook at 1 Dec 2008 - 11:06 AM

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mpnuttall
mpnuttall e2 Member 891 forum postsmpnuttall vcard United Kingdom6 Constructive Critique Points
1 Dec 2008 - 2:04 PM

Really like this. Nice pose and eye contact. As Wayne mentions, the model and backgound could use a little seperation. I think that were you to shoot a similar set again, a lighter dress colour would be the easiest work-around, as the lighting looks (don't know if it is?) very natural, and a rim light would give it more of a studio feel I think; not necessarily a bad thing, just a different type of shot.

Nice work still though. I've only recently got hold of a couple of flashes and taken an interest in portrait photography, so it's great to come across nice ideas and executions like this. One day i might actually take something half decent myself!!

Cheers, Mark

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hook
hook e2 Member 7706 forum postshook vcard England
1 Dec 2008 - 2:51 PM

thank you mark.

My intention was to keep the lighting looking as natural as possible, as the soft box on the left was as high as i could get it

Last Modified By hook at 1 Dec 2008 - 2:53 PM

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cider
cider e2 Member 10cider vcard United Kingdom
8 Feb 2009 - 11:10 PM

Hi this is fantastic i just love what you have done here.
Would like to do some work with you.

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hook
hook e2 Member 7706 forum postshook vcard England
10 Feb 2009 - 9:27 AM

always up for working with people cider.

just drop me a line some time.

Mk

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