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Brand:Canon
Camera:Canon EOS 5D
Lens:90.0 mm
Recording media:JPEG (digital)
Date Taken:30 Jul 2009 - 3:04 PM
Focal Length:90mm
Lens Max Aperture:f/2.8
Aperture:f/2.8
Shutter Speed:1/200sec
Exposure Comp:0.0
ISO:100
Exposure Mode:Aperture-priority AE
Metering Mode:Multi-segment
Flash:On, Fired
Title:Ella
Username:petelisle petelisle
Uploaded:9 Jul 2011 - 10:29 AM
Tags:Portraits / people
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tuhin
tuhin  8
9 Jul 2011 - 10:59 AM

Nice shot.
Tuhin

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iancatch
iancatch  7 England45 Constructive Critique Points
9 Jul 2011 - 12:44 PMConstructive Critique!This comment was flagged as constructive critique! 

A really well posed for portrait. Just a couple of little things. I think the dof is great but I think the focus point is on her hair just above her right eye as we look at the image. This has made her eyes a little soft. In portraits it is the eyes sharpness that really make a image. Because of the pose used and the dof you can forgive the back eye being soft but the front eye needs to be pin sharp. Also I'm not sure about the make-up - she is a beautiful little girl without it and I think child portraits look much better natural. The lighting and warm tones, however, I think you have got spot on.

Just one other thing about composition. The image looks a little bottom heavy because of all the free space above her head. You could try a couple of things here. Just crop the space at the top or crop in such a way that there is no empty space and her hair goes to the edge of the image. This would then also have the effect of really concentrating the viewers eyes on the face and in particular the eyes. It may or may not work but as there is no mod availble I cant upload a version of what I mean.

Overall all though it a pretty good portrait and as I have said I love the lighting.

Hope this is useful

IanGrin

Last Modified By iancatch at 9 Jul 2011 - 12:45 PM

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debu
debu  4 India
9 Jul 2011 - 1:34 PM

So cute! lovely one.
debu

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colin beeley
colin beeley e2 Member 121087 forum postscolin beeley vcard England10 Constructive Critique Points
11 Jul 2011 - 7:31 PM

i bet she would look just as nice without the make-up though.

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