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Camera:Canon EOS 40D
Recording media:RAW (digital)
Title:Emily
Username:andrejD andrejD
Uploaded:21 Nov 2009 - 10:13 AM
Tags:Portraits / people
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EmmaLouise29
21 Nov 2009 - 10:20 AM

Great shot
Emma

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richard20d
21 Nov 2009 - 10:26 AMConstructive Critique!This comment was flagged as constructive critique! 

The next generation of Fashion Model. This is another nice shot and I know its a street scene, but the guy in the rugby shirt is so dominent in the image it distracts my eye. Perhaps a little more blur might remove him from standing out so much. These are some of my wifes favorite images on here. It made her get out all the black and white shots of the kids when they were younger.

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kinfatric
kinfatric  10550 forum posts Scotland9 Constructive Critique Points
21 Nov 2009 - 10:31 AM

a top street photograph but agree perhaps a little more blur as said above

Last Modified By kinfatric at 21 Nov 2009 - 10:32 AM

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andrejD
andrejD  5 Germany1 Constructive Critique Points
21 Nov 2009 - 10:34 AM

Thank you Richard! I'm glad to hear that! The guy in the shirt is already blurred a little (I'm always worried about exaggerating this). I probably should have converted this to bw.

Last Modified By andrejD at 21 Nov 2009 - 10:35 AM

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accipiter
accipiter e2 Member 5accipiter vcard England57 Constructive Critique Points
21 Nov 2009 - 11:36 AM

Good picture and fun. If you crop out the guy on the extreme left then the guy with the jersey doesn't bother me. Dont fuss too much though - the gal says it all! A

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shaks
shaks  12561 forum posts Tokelau1 Constructive Critique Points
21 Nov 2009 - 11:46 AM

She's a natural in front of the lens.

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tazisdylan
21 Nov 2009 - 5:11 PMConstructive Critique!This comment was flagged as constructive critique! 

A model in the making! Great pose (with the shoes), and attitude!

I think the feedback from all above is fair. And my suggestions are:

Blur the man with THAT shirt
Convert to mono
Colour pop your model

And maybe a slight crop on the right to get rid of the lady (my eye draws to her off the model's left arm. Not sure how the crop will influence the overall composition and you may find that the mono conversion and colour pop will make her less of an issue.

Anyway, these are my thoughts - not that I am an expert!

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andrejD
andrejD  5 Germany1 Constructive Critique Points
21 Nov 2009 - 11:18 PM

Oh, thanks Pete!

Thanks to everyone for your comments! All comments are justified. I hope that the photograph that I'll upload tomorrow (taken almost at the same time, as this one) will convince you a bit more.

Last Modified By andrejD at 21 Nov 2009 - 11:20 PM

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riprap007
riprap007  101568 forum posts England37 Constructive Critique Points
21 Nov 2009 - 11:37 PM

those butterflies oncemore; this belongs in a white box gallery

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andrejD
andrejD  5 Germany1 Constructive Critique Points
21 Nov 2009 - 11:45 PM

Thank you Nicholas! Unfortunately I don't really know what a white box galery is... This butterfly dress photographs are taken on the same day. Seems to be my most succesfull photogrraphic day so far Wink

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riprap007  101568 forum posts England37 Constructive Critique Points
21 Nov 2009 - 11:59 PM

Any space with big white walls and preferably with a constant lighting, and to do it justice, I'd print large!

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fasfoto  6 Czech Republic
22 Nov 2009 - 9:35 PM

greeeat!

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cats_123
cats_123 e2 Member 104030 forum postscats_123 vcard Northern Ireland25 Constructive Critique Points
23 Nov 2009 - 4:56 PM

brilliant street ph.

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