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First of a set.

Camera:Canon EOS 40D
Lens:sigma 10-20 0r 17-70 will check later
Recording media:RAW (digital)
Title:Emma
Username:TRUEX TRUEX
Uploaded:5 Dec 2008 - 1:45 PM
Tags:Black & white, Fashion, Portraits / people
Votes:37
Variant - TestsVariant - Tests

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JBA
JBA  5341 forum posts United Kingdom1 Constructive Critique Points
5 Dec 2008 - 1:51 PM

Great pic. She is completely gorgeous too. . . wondering what the pic would be like without the white bit top left. . . it does add to the black and white balance though. . .

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Richsr
Richsr e2 Member 790 forum postsRichsr vcard England209 Constructive Critique Points
5 Dec 2008 - 2:03 PM

Like the tones and details in this Marcus - well setup and captured.
Regards Richard.

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DunDiggin
DunDiggin  761 forum posts United Kingdom2 Constructive Critique Points
5 Dec 2008 - 2:05 PM

It's a very striking image. The top left is a wee bit disconcerting - like the top of her head just expanded upwards - but it's a grand shot.

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steviehutch
steviehutch e2 Member 7steviehutch vcard United Kingdom
5 Dec 2008 - 2:09 PM

excellent image, love the lighting

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diphoto
diphoto  7 England
5 Dec 2008 - 2:15 PM

Agree about top left, otherwise its a fabulous image and a beautiful model. love it

Des

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culturedcanvas
5 Dec 2008 - 3:34 PMConstructive Critique!This comment was flagged as constructive critique! 

Marcus

This one does need the crop to remove that top left but the lighting is pretty good. The flash to the right is a touch too high which has left the left (our) in shadow a touch more than desired. The detail on the jacket is excellent and the left flash positioned accurately.

Despite looking like 2 flash units this was 3 as I recall and that extra light has just given a bit more separation on the right shoulder which was needed.

I'd crop into the hair here land take a strip of the left to rmeove that bright patch without going to close to the eyes. Still worthy of a click as with a few tweaks it could be significantly improved.

Dan

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Ian-Munro
Ian-Munro  6200 forum posts Wales15 Constructive Critique Points
5 Dec 2008 - 4:04 PM

Nice one.

Ian

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fransglobal
5 Dec 2008 - 4:29 PM

Gorgeous!

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thewaiter
thewaiter  121177 forum posts England9 Constructive Critique Points
5 Dec 2008 - 4:42 PM

love the detail and light but would deffinately get rid of the light top left ......

cracking model Wink

Last Modified By thewaiter at 5 Dec 2008 - 4:44 PM

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Iain_Proudfoot

Excellent photography. Great work.

Warm wishes, Iain.

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Diana
Diana e2 Member 72011 forum postsDiana vcard Netherlands19 Constructive Critique Points
7 Dec 2008 - 12:07 AM

V2 rocks Smile

Diana

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