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Frosty late afternoon above Cwm Teigl, near Blaenau Ffestiniog, North Wales

Camera:Canon Eos 40D
Lens:Canon EF-S 10-22mm 1:3.5-4.5
Recording media:JPEG (digital)
Title:Endless
Username:MHJ MHJ
Uploaded:24 Aug 2009 - 1:48 PM
Tags:Landscape / travel, Wildlife / nature
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Ian-Munro
Ian-Munro  6200 forum posts Wales15 Constructive Critique Points
24 Aug 2009 - 1:51 PMConstructive Critique!This comment was flagged as constructive critique! 

Maybe just a tweek on the levels or shadow/highlight for the foreground and mountain to the right.

After that then i would consider some fg interest like some rocks to lead you in to a fine image that you have.

Regards
Ian

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KarenFB
KarenFB Junior Gallery Team 84282 forum postsKarenFB vcard England163 Constructive Critique Points
24 Aug 2009 - 2:00 PM

Hi Marian, welcome to EPZ and the Junior Gallery section! SmileWink
(you may want to change your date of birth!)

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shandoor
shandoor  5 United Kingdom1 Constructive Critique Points
24 Aug 2009 - 2:03 PM

A wonderful image for your first upload and welcome to EPZ
Alexa

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CathR
CathR  7139 forum posts United Kingdom563 Constructive Critique Points
24 Aug 2009 - 2:18 PMConstructive Critique!This comment was flagged as constructive critique! 

A warm welcome to EPZ Marian.

And what a great first upload. I like the way you have taken advantage of the sun being behind the mountain. You still have the wonderful colours of the setting sun but you have avoided having the very bright light of the sun itself in your picture which can be very harsh.

I love the way the hills recede into the distance. It think I would have framed the shot to give just a little less sky and more of the foreground. That frost on the ground stands out well even though the foreground is in shadow.

An excellent shot, well done.

Best wishes

Catherine

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Brewster
Brewster  9 Scotland4 Constructive Critique Points
24 Aug 2009 - 2:18 PM

Nice light and atmosphere you've captured here. Welcome to ephotozine.

Bruce

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mex
mex e2 Member 6mex vcard United Kingdom3 Constructive Critique Points
24 Aug 2009 - 2:32 PM

nice 1st upload. welcome.
phil

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Iain_Proudfoot
24 Aug 2009 - 3:19 PM

A really good landscape. I really like the way you framed the scene. My only tip is to not to forget to put a comma between your search tags, which helps with the search logic.

Great work.

Warm wishes, Iain.

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mitchy81
mitchy81  5 England18 Constructive Critique Points
24 Aug 2009 - 4:03 PM

Great first shot!
Phil

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James_C
James_C  536 forum posts United Kingdom56 Constructive Critique Points
24 Aug 2009 - 5:10 PM

Wonderful first posting Marian. Personally I would do nothing more than print it, frame it and hang it on the wall.

James

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MHJ
MHJ  5 Wales
24 Aug 2009 - 8:35 PM


Quote: Hi Marian, welcome to EPZ and the Junior Gallery section!
(you may want to change your date of birth!)

I have done, not sure how that happened Sad
Thanks for pointing it out

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MHJ
MHJ  5 Wales
24 Aug 2009 - 8:36 PM

Thank you all for the comments and observations. It is very much appreciated

Marian

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JMB
JMB  5
25 Aug 2009 - 12:13 AM

Great photo Marian. Hope to see some more of that quality and composition.

Jed

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paulbroad
paulbroad  781 forum posts United Kingdom854 Constructive Critique Points
25 Aug 2009 - 5:24 PM

Nice! And it takes some doing to get that comment out of me with a landscape.

Paul

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