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Was not Intending to upload this
but figured its pretty gripping
and I think its focused well on the iris Wink

Brand:Research In Motion
Lens:3.2 mp
Recording media:JPEG (digital)
Date Taken:27 Nov 2011 - 9:57 PM
Shutter Speed:0sec
Flash:No flash function
Title:Eye Can
Username:Hands945 Hands945
Uploaded:18 Jan 2012 - 1:26 AM
Tags:Black & white, Eye ball
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KarenFB
KarenFB Junior Gallery Team 84270 forum postsKarenFB vcard England162 Constructive Critique Points
18 Jan 2012 - 7:25 AMConstructive Critique!This comment was flagged as constructive critique! 

Hi Chloe, great to see you uploading again! Smile

This is a gorgeous shot of your eye, the iris is very pretty (even in b&w).

I don't know if you have a computer programme for post processing (such as Photoshop), but if so then perhaps just a little tidying up would improve the image. For instance, I think I would use the 'Heal' tool on 4 pixels and just touch the odd bits of mascara under the eye.

(Edit: Mmmm. Looking at my modification I may have over sharpened the iris. I'm sorry I don't have time for another go right now, I'll try and have another go this afternoon.)

Last Modified By KarenFB at 18 Jan 2012 - 7:39 AM

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paulbroad
paulbroad  781 forum posts United Kingdom845 Constructive Critique Points
18 Jan 2012 - 5:49 PM

Strong image with impact - just requires the full extent of the eye in the frame and some cleaning up of odd specks.

Paul

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jamestheboy
18 Jan 2012 - 6:37 PM

This is a great looking photo from you very good work well done







james Smile

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banehawi
banehawi Critique Team 10818 forum postsbanehawi vcard Canada2820 Constructive Critique Points
18 Jan 2012 - 6:39 PM

Lots of great detail in the eye. Would love to see this in colour, just as a comparison to the mono.



Regards


Willie

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Hands945
Hands945  4 United Kingdom
8 Feb 2012 - 5:47 PM

Hi Yes I do have photoshop in future I will edit befor I upload, Thanks

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