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So this is my image of fabrice in colour, pretty much straight out of the camera and uncropped. Sorry no exif

Brand:Nikon CORPORATION
Camera:Nikon D300 Check out Nikon Nation!
Lens:70-300mm f/4.5-5.6 G VR
Date Taken:26 Jul 2010 - 4:10 PM
Focal Length:155mm
Lens Max Aperture:f/4.8
Aperture:f/8.0
Shutter Speed:1/10sec
Exposure Comp:-1/3
ISO:400
Exposure Mode:Aperture-priority AE
Metering Mode:Multi-segment
Flash:No Flash
Title:Fabrice
Username:Berniea Berniea
Uploaded:25 Jan 2011 - 8:57 PM
Tags:Portraits / people
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banehawi
banehawi Critique Team 10781 forum postsbanehawi vcard Canada2797 Constructive Critique Points
25 Jan 2011 - 9:40 PMConstructive Critique!This comment was flagged as constructive critique! 

So the issue lies with the original colour shot Bernie. Judging from the EXIF data, the light was low (its a miracle you got a decent shot at 1/10 sec at 155mm!)

The white balace seems all wrong, - its very heavily saturated with red and yellow, either due to processing, of the fact the light was too low. It would have benefitted the shot quite a bit if you had used you flash as a fill flash here I think. Using this shot as a basis for a mono conversion would produce poor results.


Ive tried to modify the colour shot to get it looking as right as I can, - but its not entirely correct, - and the mod2 mono conversion works quite well as you can see.



Hope this helps,



Willie

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paulbroad
paulbroad  681 forum posts United Kingdom842 Constructive Critique Points
26 Jan 2011 - 8:00 AMConstructive Critique!This comment was flagged as constructive critique! 

Yes, it's your original. This is a nice image and well composed but it is very orange indeed. Possibly tungsten light and the white balance has either got it wrong or you or not set on auto. Unless sure of light temperature, ALWAYS leave white balance on auto.

Your mono conversion points to a direct conversion without user control. All that orange/red will give a very flat grey result. You need to use the channel conversion tool. Will try myself, but might be difficult.

Paul

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paulbroad  681 forum posts United Kingdom842 Constructive Critique Points
26 Jan 2011 - 8:11 AMConstructive Critique!This comment was flagged as constructive critique! 

Right, I've posted my mod, which I think is much closer to a technical mono conversion. The original was almost entirely consisting of the red channel, this has much reduced red, 48 green and a touch of blue. It also needed a lot of sharpening due to your 1/10 second.

It remains a very pleasant portrait and, once you crack the technical bit, you are well on your way.

By the way, Photozine team, the 'right click' copy feature does not seem to work now.

Paul

Last Modified By paulbroad at 26 Jan 2011 - 8:13 AM

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yauimagery
26 Jan 2011 - 8:33 AM

Wow - yeah agree too much warmth in the white balance - looks like he's beein on a sunbed Wink
My mod has reduced saturation and temp with slight sharpen and contrast increase. Darkend shadows and slight increase h/l.

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devlin
devlin  4651 forum posts India39 Constructive Critique Points
26 Jan 2011 - 8:49 AM


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By the way, Photozine team, the 'right click' copy feature does not seem to work now.

Yeah its part of the new V5 feature list, you now need to click on Modifications - download photo and then it'll open a new window where you can do the right click and save thingy

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Berniea
Berniea  3 United Kingdom
26 Jan 2011 - 6:49 PM

Brilliant comments guys - fantastic feedback. Thanks for taking the time and the effort to give me such valuable constructive and skilful feedback. The mods are really interesting to look at. Could'nt have asked for more

Bernie

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