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At Whitby Goth weekend this year. A bit of a comment on modern life? Grabbed as they walked past. Not sure about this one but, as a grab shot, not sure how to do it better.

EOS 7D, ISO400, 18/125 OS Sigma at about 50mm. Auto - P mode.

Camera:Canon EOS 7D
Lens:18/125 OS Sigma
Recording media:JPEG (digital)
Title:Fag and two mobiles.
Username:paulbroad paulbroad
Uploaded:26 Nov 2011 - 7:36 AM
Tags:Cigarette, Fag, Goth, Mobile., People, Phone, Portraits / people, Women
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LynneJoyce
LynneJoyce e2 Member 6LynneJoyce vcard United Kingdom97 Constructive Critique Points
26 Nov 2011 - 8:11 AM

Grab shot or no, this one made me laugh. Three 'goths' of various ages, one with a cell phone, one with a fag in her hand. Well observed and well taken.

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paulbroad
paulbroad  681 forum posts United Kingdom843 Constructive Critique Points
26 Nov 2011 - 10:53 AM

Good point Frank - however the resulting curse may have made me eat my camera!

Paul

Last Modified By paulbroad at 26 Nov 2011 - 10:53 AM

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pamelajean
pamelajean Critique Team 8752 forum postspamelajean vcard United Kingdom1578 Constructive Critique Points
26 Nov 2011 - 6:21 PM

I like it a lot, Paul. Three is a good number, the action is good, and it's interesting that all three are lined up alongside the railings. I think their costumes are wonderful, but far from being in keeping with mobile phones. I think this image has a lot of possibilities. For instance, you could place them against a spookier background for effect. I've done a mod where I simply removed the background and added some canvas to the left. After that, you'd just need to select the background and put in another one.
Pamela.
PS: I had to have a go, see mod 2.

Last Modified By pamelajean at 26 Nov 2011 - 7:22 PM

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paulbroad
paulbroad  681 forum posts United Kingdom843 Constructive Critique Points
27 Nov 2011 - 8:00 AM

You've really upstaged me with mod 2, Pamela. Very very good indeed, and on a 600 pixel image too. Nicely done and a far better end point.

Paul

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pamelajean Critique Team 8752 forum postspamelajean vcard United Kingdom1578 Constructive Critique Points
30 Nov 2011 - 11:42 PM

Thankyou, Paul.

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