Fashion series 1

pankaj_dutta

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29 Apr 2010 - 2:15 PM

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Really lovely.

rubyblue

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29 Apr 2010 - 3:19 PM

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nice shot, although i feel the right arm is a little too far back (behind her head ) if the right fore-arm followed the line of her left upper arm it would be a less confliting sharp angle and also take away the bump below the right shoulder joint formed there. it would also ballance the pictue alittle better.
hope this helps

johnnyboy114

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29 Apr 2010 - 4:07 PM

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Kinda agree with her right arm....looks a little awkward, but I actually like the other arm as it follows the lines of her hip. Nicely toned and good image.

monosodium

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29 Apr 2010 - 6:27 PM

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Overall I like this image and it looks like your initial capture was good, model pose is right for the type of image you wanted to capture. I agree with the comment about the right arm and maintaining the line through from the left but it's a small thing.

There are a couple of other niggles for me - everything looks a bit purple, if you intended this then fair enough; but if you didn't mean to then you might want to take the white balance from the background instead of the dress. When you do that the eye make-up really starts to stand out too.

Also, and probably the bigger thing for me is that something looks odd about her left forearm. At first I thought it was the pose but out of interest, did you do any sculpting of her arm with the liquify / distortion tools?

rubyblue

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1 May 2010 - 12:17 AM

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hi nicola, uploaded mod with strong tint of blue to background. there are several ways to do but for some pics the easiest way is to outline model using magnetic lasoo,when done right click inside selection then select inverse this gives your background section,the adjust whatever you want. saturation hue,levels ,use phot filters etc:
hope this is helpful to you.