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My friend ask me if i would take some fashion photographs for her. Here is one of my results.

Brand:NIKON CORPORATION
Camera:Nikon D70 Check out Nikon Nation!
Lens:18-70mm f/3.5-4.5 G
Recording media:JPEG (digital)
Date Taken:16 Aug 2011 - 1:52 PM
Focal Length:60mm
Lens Max Aperture:f/4.4
Aperture:f/4.5
Shutter Speed:1/3200sec
Exposure Comp:0.0
ISO:1600
Exposure Mode:Not Defined
Metering Mode:Multi-segment
Flash:No Flash
Title:Fashion shoot
Username:AliceLuisePhotography AliceLuisePhotography
Uploaded:18 Nov 2011 - 7:59 AM
Tags:Fashion, General, Girls, Humour / fun, Lady, Portraits / people
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Hoffy
Hoffy e2 Member 10257 forum postsHoffy vcard England16 Constructive Critique Points
18 Nov 2011 - 11:14 AMConstructive Critique!This comment was flagged as constructive critique! 

Please take this the way it is meant.
When you do these always focus on the face and forget the rest. Set you camera to around f8. You will find you will get most images pin sharp. Then when doing this type of work remove the artifacts that detract from the model. i,e Window, Box to left and Dandilion on right. You will find the image takes on a new life. hope this helps and keep it going.
paul

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KarenFB
KarenFB Junior Gallery Team 84360 forum postsKarenFB vcard England163 Constructive Critique Points
18 Nov 2011 - 11:42 AM

You've thought out the photo well, I love the blue of the shed. I can see what Paul means about the distractions, it may have been just a question of taking one step to the right (perhaps this happened because you focused on the face and forgot about the rest)! Wink - I really like the model and her outfit.

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