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Taken with a feather in a glass with half water and half lemonade. Macro filters used, Very fun experimenting with something new. Some editing done, boosted some colours.

Brand:Canon
Camera:Canon EOS 600D
Lens:18.0 - 55.0 mm (35 mm equivalent: 28.3 - 86.5 mm)
Recording media:JPEG (digital)
Date Taken:19 Mar 2013 - 11:46 AM
Focal Length:55mm
Aperture:f/11.0
Shutter Speed:1/10sec
Exposure Comp:0.0
ISO:100
Metering Mode:Evaluative
Flash:Off, Did not fire
Title:Feather ...
Username:Sone Sone
Uploaded:29 Apr 2013 - 7:53 PM
Tags:Feather, General
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Coast
Coast Critique Team 6774 forum postsCoast vcard United Kingdom290 Constructive Critique Points
29 Apr 2013 - 8:41 PM

Very creative abstract. Might be worth playing with the hue/saturation to see what you can get, possibly enhancing the blue coming through the cerise feather. I would also possibly crop in too.

That said this is an interesting experiment and makes for an appealing abstract.

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mrswoolybill Critique Team 7394 forum postsmrswoolybill vcard United Kingdom967 Constructive Critique Points
29 Apr 2013 - 8:45 PM

This is the best upload I've seen from you in the Critique Gallery. It has precision and mystery. I like the way you have used the curves within the feather.
The suggest that I would make would be to add just a bit of brightness to make the highlights sparkle. I might look at a square crop too, though I'm not 100% certain.
Moira

Last Modified By mrswoolybill at 29 Apr 2013 - 8:46 PM

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mrswoolybill Critique Team 7394 forum postsmrswoolybill vcard United Kingdom967 Constructive Critique Points
29 Apr 2013 - 8:51 PM

Synchronised Modifications, a new Olympic discipline?? Wink

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banehawi
banehawi Critique Team 10781 forum postsbanehawi vcard Canada2795 Constructive Critique Points
29 Apr 2013 - 10:05 PM

Very original and creative. And lovely.


The blue tone is caused by underexposure, unless you made it blue yourself, and when this is sorted out, i.e. the black and white points are set, it comes alive. Along with a medium amount of sharpening, the image looks great.

I know you dont have Photoshop, so I cant tell you how to do this, - what editor are you using?


Ive loaded your original with this done, and also a triptych.


Regards


Willie

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