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The second effort from my short and frantic stop off at Ilkley Moor. Thanks again for all that gave the time to offer feedback on the previous shot and I look forward to your comments again.
Phil

Brand:NIKON CORPORATION
Camera:Nikon D90 Check out Nikon Nation!
Lens:18.0-105.0 mm f/3.5-5.6
Recording media:RAW (digital)
Date Taken:7 Oct 2011 - 7:20 AM
Focal Length:18mm
Lens Max Aperture:f/3.5
Aperture:f/22.0
Shutter Speed:0.5sec
Exposure Comp:0.0
ISO:200
Exposure Mode:Manual
Metering Mode:Multi-segment
Flash:No Flash
Title:First Light
Username:Philo Philo
Uploaded:14 Oct 2011 - 2:40 PM
Tags:Clouds, Colours, Ilkley moor, Landscape / travel, Rocks, Sunrise
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tmann
tmann  9 United States2 Constructive Critique Points
14 Oct 2011 - 2:42 PM

stunning!!!!!!!!!!

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franken e2 Member 123270 forum postsfranken vcard Wales4 Constructive Critique Points
14 Oct 2011 - 3:08 PM

Superb!

Ken

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mikesmith e2 Member 1045 forum postsmikesmith vcard United Kingdom35 Constructive Critique Points
14 Oct 2011 - 3:17 PM

Worth the quick dash, this is stunning. Love the way the light hits the rocks and splits off into those bright orange shafts 10/10
Mike

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Philo e2 Member 487 forum postsPhilo vcard England83 Constructive Critique Points
14 Oct 2011 - 4:13 PM

Many thanks guys, your comments are appreciated.
Phil

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h4rsx  4 United Kingdom5 Constructive Critique Points
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Nice shot, and a cracking sky. My only minor critique would be that the blend between the sky and land is telling. it might be worth blending this in subtly with a brush and build it up so that the transition is smoother.

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Philo e2 Member 487 forum postsPhilo vcard England83 Constructive Critique Points
14 Oct 2011 - 5:52 PM


Quote: Nice shot, and a cracking sky. My only minor critique would be that the blend between the sky and land is telling. it might be worth blending this in subtly with a brush and build it up so that the transition is smoother.

Thanks for the feedback I will have another look at the blend.

Phil

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banehawi Critique Team 10988 forum postsbanehawi vcard Canada2984 Constructive Critique Points
15 Oct 2011 - 6:23 PM

If theres blending Phil, is this then a compilation of more than one shot? Just curious about how its constructed.

All you need then is Moses with the tablets and its off to Hollywood!


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Philo e2 Member 487 forum postsPhilo vcard England83 Constructive Critique Points
15 Oct 2011 - 11:00 PM

Sorry Willie, I normally put in the description if the shot is blended. This is 2 exposures: one for the sky and the other the foreground. Having looked at the shot again it isn't quite a blending issue as such; the exposure for the rocks has produced a halo, presumably due to backlighting. I have now resolved this and will probably give this another airing in the main gallery.
Can't believe you haven't offered a modTongue
Phil

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banehawi Critique Team 10988 forum postsbanehawi vcard Canada2984 Constructive Critique Points
16 Oct 2011 - 3:27 PM

Wanted to check first Phil, so I know what Im up against!


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