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i took this yesterday ,i loved the center spot

Brand:NIKON CORPORATION
Camera:Nikon D90 Check out Nikon Nation!
Recording media:JPEG (digital)
Date Taken:20 May 2012 - 1:08 PM
Focal Length:85mm
Lens Max Aperture:f/5.7
Aperture:f/5.6
Shutter Speed:1/90sec
Exposure Comp:-0.118875
ISO:200
Exposure Mode:Aperture-priority AE
Metering Mode:Center-weighted average
Flash:No Flash
Title:first out
Username:williamsloan williamsloan
Uploaded:21 May 2012 - 12:47 PM
Tags:Flowers & plants
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puertouk
puertouk  31083 forum posts United Kingdom17 Constructive Critique Points
21 May 2012 - 2:09 PM

Hi Billy, I see we're onto plants now, instead of H & W. Nice image. Did you notice the insect in the flower? As you can see I had your image in Photoshop camera raw, HSL/Greyscale and removed all the colours except yellow. Put the image into PS and copied the background layer. Layers panel > blending mode > overlay > opacity 100%. Hope you like it.
Stephen

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Irishkate
Irishkate e2 Member 431 forum postsIrishkate vcard United Kingdom76 Constructive Critique Points
21 May 2012 - 9:53 PM

Good to see you trying more flowers.
Getting the centre sharp is most important part.
Flowers are difficult to get sharp outside in wind.Some members have suggested using
Higher ISO 400 or more with faster shutter speed maybe 400 or more.
Bit of trial and error.
There's an awful lot to learn!
So keep at it.
KateGrin

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mhfore
mhfore  7 England176 Constructive Critique Points
22 May 2012 - 8:22 AMConstructive Critique!This comment was flagged as constructive critique! 

Good morning Billy, how are you ?

I agree, the centre spot does make a focal point which grabs your eye, well spotted.

Billy I think it might work better if you make a square-ish crop to remove some of the background foilage as in this case to my eye's it acts as a bit of a distraction. Also alter the midtones slightly by going into "levels" and moving the middle pointer (grey) very slightly to the right, but be careful not to over do it Wink. Then using your "Burn" tool set to around 5% gentley run it around the foilage that's left to darken it a little more which will help the flower stand out more.

Take care Billy
Martin

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