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I attended a photography course recently, and we had a model available on the day. I've never photographed a model before, so these are my first attempts at proper 'people' photography. All comments welcome, please!

Camera:Sony alpha 330
Lens:18-55
Recording media:JPEG (digital)
Title:First photoshoot 1
Username:ambro ambro
Uploaded:17 Sep 2010 - 11:07 PM
Tags:Black, Black & white, Girl, Hood, Jacket, Model, Modelling, Mood, Photoshoot, Portraits / people, Scene, Street, White
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NeilWigan
NeilWigan e2 Member 4NeilWigan vcard England15 Constructive Critique Points
17 Sep 2010 - 11:20 PM

lovely girl very well shot.i am not experienced enough to critique ,but it looks good to me.

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Philo
Philo e2 Member 471 forum postsPhilo vcard England83 Constructive Critique Points
18 Sep 2010 - 8:14 AM

Hi Victor, I've never done a photoshoot but this looks quite good to me and I like the mono conversion. The highlight on her nose is a bit distracting and could maybe do with toning down a little. When I first viewed it I liked the zippers and black & white hooped top but then my eye kept getting drawn to it. I therefore decided to have a go at a mod to remove it. Not sure it is an improvement but does provide an alternative to consider.
Phil

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diver pete
diver pete  1071 forum posts New Zealand1 Constructive Critique Points
18 Sep 2010 - 8:31 AM

An excellent image. Looking forward to seeing some more of your work.
Regards,
Pete

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