Fishing

picturistic

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4 Feb 2010 - 10:49 AM

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lovely tones and comp

Adrian

Patricia Fenn

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4 Feb 2010 - 3:08 PM

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dificult to crit this. Looks like a fine image to me. The horizone cuts accross the middle but to be honest it works in this case. I like the distant fisherman cutting the horizon. The tone is good as is the exposure.
Nice one!

NEWMANP (Critique Team)

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4 Feb 2010 - 9:16 PM

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yes, its very nice i like the mirror of the two anglers in sillouette in fact a verical of just that section would be lovely. it takes a while for the eye to find the second one and when you do it all comes together and adds that vital seconary element. in fact i think its so important that id have been tempted to take a second shot zooming in to concentrate on the two figures with the longer focal length pulling them closer together. i like the tone of the sky and water and in the context of this composition, the use of negative space to the left.

i think the horizon is not quite true but thats easy to correct in PS,- running up to the right and i would also crop a little from the base but overall a rather pleasing image.

best regards,
Phil

paulbroad

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5 Feb 2010 - 7:21 PM

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Very nice indeed as it stands, but there are multiple images in this original by modifying composition and tones/depth of colour.

Good stuff. Strong and simple - a great formula for success.

Paul