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6 Apr 2009 - 9:26 AM

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very well caught speed shot, but the angle to a bit to uphill, maybe try making thr shutter speed a tiny incy bit faster, so you can still get the full amount of detail and get the car in movement still,.
very good though, and they are one hell of a car to go round it.
Scott

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banehawi (Critique Team)

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6 Apr 2009 - 1:55 PM

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Youve done well with your panning technique, and the diagonal presentation works well to accentuate the sense of speed.

Looks like you didnt sharpen it after you re sized, - Ive done this in the mod and it looks quite a bit better.

Im assuming this was shot handheld at 300mm? I wonder why youre using such a small aperture, - f/8 would give you a sharper shot, and more flexibility with your shutter speed, - try it the next time your shooting motorsports and see if it makes a difference. It will allow a faster shutter for handholding, and if you pan fast enough you will get background blur, - probably less than in this shot, - but enough.


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Willie

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