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good or bad feedback much appreciated!
Focus and tones are especially good; the black and white is excellent. Your model looks particularly confident. Great eyes!
The angled presentation is unorthodox and perhaps a bit challenging for some viewers, though it appeals to me for its originality.
The curve at the very bottom left (your model's knee??)is a bit intrusive, the sort of thing so easily missed when you look through the viewfinder.
You might also consider cropping off the top, as the pattern of the curtain is distracting in that position; the lower appearance of the pattern however forms a pleasing diagonal via the flower and your model's shoulder to the edge of the frame.
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I agree with all Bill has said (the angle isn't for me, but it does make it original and different!).
I think I would carefully crop off the bottom (to remove the knee(?) and empty hand), and I would also crop a little off the top to a)make a square format and b)remove the flower from the top right. It's all down to personal opinion, if you like it then that is the most important thing!
I like the angle and the use of mono - but then I like "different"
thank you for all comment bill, and karen i'll have a mess around with it and see what it looks like..thanks again.
haha, thank you Fran! x
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